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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-02-08 11:27 PM



Appointment For Disappointment


disappointment
fills the room
thickest smoke
of cheap perfume
a lingering after
deed is done
words spoken yet
said for no one
more is now broken
than just a promise
belief becomes
a doubting Thomas
a trick played where
I held the receipt
dropped my heart
again in defeat

"I have already paid for all my future sins."  Sade...(King of Sorrow)

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-08 11:31 PM


incredibly sad and so vivid.....*hugs* to you  
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2 posted 2002-02-08 11:34 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Helen, such sadness fills your words, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and my thoughts and prayers are always there for you! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, always believe in your heart and your dreams will always come true! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

arthur
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3 posted 2002-02-09 07:07 PM


this is really sad
you must have been in a mood to find it
arthur

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4 posted 2002-02-10 02:16 AM


Helen,
Yup...sad indeed.

peaches73533
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5 posted 2002-02-10 04:44 AM


Very sad indeed.
Peaches

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Deep in the heart
6 posted 2002-02-11 11:58 AM


NEVER defeated, only having an obstacle placed you your path

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

jfreak
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7 posted 2002-02-12 05:47 PM


My Lady,

I must say you DO-NOT-DISAPPOINT!!!!  I can't begin to emphasize that enough.  I am so enamored with your writing...the imagery you use is amazing...for instance...

"thickest smoke
of cheap perfume"

&

"belief becomes
a doubting Thomas"

Just blows me away...I LOVE IT!!

J~

[This message has been edited by jfreak (02-12-2002 05:48 PM).]

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