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Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

0 posted 2002-02-08 09:45 PM

Upon The Beach of Love

Through the darkness he comes to me,
approaching silently
With gentle eyes filled with feeling
inner self revealing

We share romantic moonlit stroll
giving passions control
Talking about the life we lead
unsure how to proceed

A glance, a touch of tenderness
leading to soft caress
A kiss he takes makes us aware
while desires start to flare

My deepest lusts are not concealed,
my need for him revealed
Fulfillment comes that’s undreamed of,
upon the beach of love

Karen Torbiak 2002©

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

1 posted 2002-02-08 09:48 PM

Wonderful!

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

2 posted 2002-02-08 09:49 PM

Karen,

What a lovely place to be

I think I need a vacation *chuckles* I wonder if Dave would mind if I kidnapped him?

I enjoyed

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2002-02-08 10:18 PM

Karen - I know this beach I found today. It's over on the west coast of the Island. Start walking, and I'll meet you in the mist...

BC

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2002-02-08 10:49 PM

We all need to spend some time on that beach of love...James

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

5 posted 2002-02-08 11:01 PM

Sharing such a beach with your Love. Its a wonderful thing, I'm sure. I love this, Lady. )

For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2002-02-08 11:07 PM

of course you realize, I love this

how perfect

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

7 posted 2002-02-09 08:51 AM

Oh Karen, this is so lovely.
"My deepest lusts are not concealed,
my need for him revealed
Fulfillment comes that’s undreamed of,
upon the beach of love"

This is wonderful.

floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

8 posted 2002-02-09 05:09 PM

Hello Karen

Such stunning images of romance you have given us here.....beautiful!

Take care......Sue

Suetang

GenXer
Senior Member

since 2001-12-15

Posts 583
USA

9 posted 2002-02-09 05:13 PM

Karen - I now know my problem, I have been going to the beach of loneliness for too long. I need to find this beach.lol Your rhyming and flow were right on target with this write. Well done.

Dave

arthur
Senior Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 678
england

10 posted 2002-02-09 07:05 PM

very much to the point
arthur

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

11 posted 2002-02-09 07:07 PM

Karen~

This, like all of your is so stunning.....lovely images....HUGS

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

12 posted 2002-02-09 07:08 PM

Karen, point me in the general direction of this beach please! Good write.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

13 posted 2002-02-09 07:42 PM

Karen.... this is perfectly you. Well done little lady.
alan

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

14 posted 2002-02-09 08:32 PM

Karen....the beach...the moon...your Phantom
lover....all wrapped up in one very beautiful
write....as you always can do so well..

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

15 posted 2002-02-09 09:56 PM

Beautifully expressed Karen....your heart is overflowing in this...as usual I might add! Very well done!

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

16 posted 2002-02-09 10:11 PM

Karen darling girl this is sooooooo incredibly amazing I can’t tell you how amazingly good this is, it’s brilliant just as you are. Do you know you are amazingly talented? Of course you don’t but you are indeed.

YOU'VE had some fabulous beach moments lately

Truly outstanding writing and I love it love it love it.

And by the way I LOVE IT and you darling girl are superb

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

17 posted 2002-02-10 07:43 PM

Karen, this is the place to be, isn't it? Wonderful, my favorite spot, and this is the best fantasy of all.
Sandra

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

18 posted 2002-02-10 07:51 PM

Stunning!!!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

19 posted 2002-02-11 01:34 PM

I am beached on love
high and dry ... no escape now
I am satisfied

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

20 posted 2002-02-11 02:13 PM

i want to be tanned with love on this beach.
you are so romantic Karen

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