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Land of Hearts |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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I landed into a fairy land so small following a hare into a hole, that's all woke up to the clamoring of spoons and appeared at a mad tea party, not to soon! Looked for magic formulae to get out received word of hidden exits from scouts asking me to swallow secret potions for me to leave not knowing that the recipe would catch me deceived I grew too tall to get through an encrusted door shrank too small to lift the key from off the floor found my way into an orchard with heart shaped fruit and offended a guardian who had his army follow suit. I am a young maiden given to falling asleep near babbling brooks, while reading children's fairytales from illustrated books; I soon awoke to the prodding of my dearest Mom... "awake, it's only a dream, the Queen of Hearts sounded an alarm". [This message has been edited by ecrivan (02-08-2002 07:43 PM).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*ah* this land of hearts seems so very familiar to me...*giggling* well done...You have captured in verse the land very well...**big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Thankyou Startime for your recognition  |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Martin darling boy this is utterly utterly wonderful I truly feel as if I was following Alice down her hole You’ve always been an excellent writer, lately your even better   Love and warm stuff As always Slushy :kissTo give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Very entertaining. Thanks for sharing.  -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Hello Marsha and Newell, Glad to put a smile on your faces!  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 YAY!!! Ooohhhhh...I love this wonderful Alice-esque journey you took me on, now what we can we do about that Jabberwocky? (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you know, I have yet to see all of Alice In Wonderland.....maybe I'll rent it this weekend very nicely done!! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks for sharing this one, Martin...I still love "Alice In Wonderland" I also love the Queen of Hearts, but in my version...Alice falls asleep at her computer because it doesn't want to work...and she dreams about the Queen of Parts.  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Landas Luver Junior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 11 |
This was a great poem. Thnks for sharing it with us.From Carlos Roman.(A.K.A.)Landasluver |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Just goes to shoe the variety of topics you could all tap...personally I find it very enjoyable to give new life to old fables or familiar plays and novels. That's where I have had the joy to get inspiration |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Hey vandana, Any equivalents of the great Alice in Indian culture? [This message has been edited by ecrivan (02-09-2002 07:07 PM).] |
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