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Open Poetry #18

Snowflakes from the sky.

jennirey
Member

since 2002-01-24

Posts 198
North Richland HillsTx

0 posted 2002-02-06 11:54 PM

We spent the day together,
laughing and holding hands.
Enjoying each others company.
as it shall be till the end.
The snow started falling upon us,
Big fluffy flakes from the sky.
I looked out side and was mesemerized
to see them floating by.
You laughed in utter amuzement.
to see the kid in me.
The gleam in my eyes
as the flakes fell from the sky.
I was practically dancing with glee.
Your face beamed in delight,
as mine was frozen in time.
As the big fluffy flakes
leisurely
fell from the sky.

02/2002

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

1 posted 2002-02-07 12:16 PM

This is absolutely gorgeous!!! It gave me goosebumps!! Really great write!!!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2002-02-07 03:32 AM

Jennirey~
Welcome to Passions~

This is delightful~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-02-07 08:44 AM

(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh my gosh, this is so romantic and so beautiful, I cried reading this to feel such rapture and happiness flow from your heart in love! (kiss on cheek) May the child in you always sing like an angel forever and ever like this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart sweet Jennifer, thank you for sharing!