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Simple Devotion
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Simple Devotion |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
He haunts the shadows of my dreams This lover that I need, my fears to tame Waking me with thoughts of eternity With gentle whispers of my name He strolls the corridors of my heart Picking up the pieces burst askew One by one placing them abreast Shaping the ornaments of love anew Softly, tenderly miracles in hope Speaking of tomorrows without doubts Framing a future painted with petals A longing is born amid protestant shouts Struggling to regain love’s adulation Healing the parts with simple devotion |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  BRAVO!!! Ooohhhhh...I love it, sweet friend, devotion is the most beautiful kind of love, I love it!!! (big huggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is a breathtakingly beautiful sonnet! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I love this sonnet! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Softly, tenderly miracles in hope Speaking of tomorrows without doubts~ Wonderful writing Dulcinea~ Devotion goes hand and hand when we love and are loved, truly and deeply with all our hearts. It's nice to read you here, you sound wonderfully happy~ |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Noah, yes, there is nothing better than devotion. When all else fails, devotion takes hold and pulls you through! Thank you very much! Interloper, what can I say but Thank you! ~blushing~ BluesSerenade, I am so glad you could find the happiness in this piece, at the time, it wasn't a very happy moment when I wrote it. But I am very contented now, thank you! |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
This is beautiful. I love how he heals the broken heart. "The only love there is, is the love we make."--Prince |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Thank you J.K. Mitchell, He does and did do that for me. |
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