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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Blind my eyes To things I wish I couldn’t see Steal the vision Of his leaving me Mute my hearing Dissolve the sound of good bye Silence these words That make me cry Clear my mind Fade this melancholy reminisce Void the recalling Of his passionate kiss Ease my soul Dull this unending ache I feel Numb these emotions Allow me to heal ~SEA~ |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
Healing begins when we ask it to come in. And the watch begins to move. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is almost a mantra of determination Sue, and ouch, I've been there, and will probably be there again...grin. A painful read that I hope is not based in your present reality. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Susan, This perfectly describes exactly how I feel about a lost love. You've said this so well. Thank you, sweetie. (((hugs))) Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) So very sad but beautiful, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and your lost love and I hope now you have found trrue happiness to hold forever! My thoughts are always with you, sweet friend, we all love you so much, you are an angel to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!   May love and light alwyas shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you guys are so the best....I am fine, I promise  My pen is full of sad ink lately that's all thank you each very much |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Sue, this is very touching. I loved it. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Dee, you are awesome, thank you!!  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Well Sue, I hope that your pen runs out of sad ink real soon...even though this is very well written... |
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DayDreamer99 Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 72 |
if only it was possible..*sigh* Tifferz |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely, yet sad Sue. I have learned...that in order to heal, we first must forgive. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* well your sad ink sure touches the heart...I hope that soon your muse will flow with the joy of love and life...gosh you got to me with this poem even though I read that you were okay...**big big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
" allow me to heal" how many of us have said these words. nice enjoyable write, sad, floria Floria |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Gawd, I know this well! This is one of your best Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
Very, very beautiful, with nice flow. I like your writing You are a talented lady....and her crown was formed by the ice in her eyes |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Clear my mind Fade this melancholy reminisce Void the recalling Of his passionate kiss Ease my soul Dull this unending ache I feel Numb these emotions Allow me to heal ================================= ahhhh but the "ache of again" ...surely does inspire great things from thy pen  me thinks even blind...some pretty blue flames would beckon. you know that I know........and so on. You speak to me in riddles and you speak to me in rhymes. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all for liking this one, welcome Icequeen and Janet, yes... that darn ache likes to hang around my ink well |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SEA - it does take time, it does for sure. Hang in there. Peace be with you... BC |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Thank you BC, I have a feeling it will take more liftimes than I will ever live..... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Susan--Time is the great healer...but while waiting for it, it sure hurts. You've expressed it well! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
time is a wonderful thing, it heals wounds without you really knowing till it's done thank you Martie |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Time heals wounds.....which is a truly great thing. Very sad, poignant poetry, SEA. I enjoyed it a lot.  *Krista Knutson* |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
Susan, though i really like your words, i wish the blue ink of your pen dries out faster...take care, dear one.... |
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