Melodious Concoction of Love (Wilfred Yeats Inspired)

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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

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0 posted 2002-01-04 03:17 PM

It's your love that causes me to drift away.
This Muskrat love makes me go crazy on you.
So let's make love, cuz your my best friend.
In these moments, I'm amazed by you.

I swear you are the love of my life.
I feel like making love cuz
I'm walking on holy water every time
that your around.

Because you love me, only God could stop
me from loving you.
The keeper of the stars sent me to you
so you could keep me from being
a lady blue.

Your love amazes me,
and I would give everything
just to hear you say you love me.
When I close my eyes, I can feel you breath.

I will sail my vessel, because life's a dance.
We can slow dance, after sitting on the dock of the bay.
When you need me I'll be there,
cuz all's you gotta do is call.

Without you I'm blue,
and I wonder if I'm crazy for loving you,
but we'll dance under the stars over Texas.
When we are done I'll watch you while you sleep.

Then I'll drift off to dream in your arms
under wide open spaces.
It's a great day to be alive
for I have been blessed and I will
love you forever...
faithfully.

(remembering a time long ago when our dear friend Wilfred did this at a different site. Taking the title of songs and making poetry out of it. Was having fun with this again. and remembering....)

The challenge, how many titles can you find hidden here??

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (01-05-2002 09:17 AM).]

Midnitesun

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Gaia

1 posted 2002-01-04 03:38 PM

I love it when song titles are woven into a poetic love blanket. Well done, Gentle Spirit.

Soleil Noir
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since 2001-12-19

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USA

2 posted 2002-01-04 03:44 PM

Very well done, indeed...

Victoria

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Posts 5869

3 posted 2002-01-04 03:47 PM

Bill would have loved this..i miss him alot
thanks for posting donna..lovely..hugss

~Victoria~

"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides."
~ David Viscott

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

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Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-01-04 09:05 PM

(smiles) Ooohhhhhhhh...I'm not sure, there must be so many titles in there, but I can only recognize some of them. This is sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, you always write such beautiful declarations of sweet love! (kiss on cheek) By the way, what's the answer? Give me a hint! (giggles) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Marsha

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since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

5 posted 2002-01-04 09:21 PM

Gentle S this is wonderful,I too miss Wilfred he was such a beautiful poet.

This is wonderful, I didn't count them I was too enthralled by the poetry. Utterly wonderful writing

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-01-04 09:30 PM

Donna, This is wonderful! I was trying to count and there has to be up around 20 or so song titles...so many of my favourites I kept losing count as the songs popped into my head...lol....great write!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

texasrose
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since 2001-10-24

Posts 146

7 posted 2002-01-05 09:22 AM

I think this is great. I have counted maybe thirty plus? Just guessing. Hey, give us the answer soon, I am curious!

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

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Victoria Australia

8 posted 2002-01-05 02:45 PM

Gentle Spirit,
I miss him too, although you have done him proud in this memory write.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

9 posted 2002-01-05 02:54 PM

How nice of you to keep his spirit alive in Passions by taking something he loved to do and doing a beautiful poem to remind us not only of him, but of love too. What a fantastic idea and poem, this was very well done.

~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~

strbbux
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10 posted 2002-01-05 05:48 PM

This made me want to sing. great poem. floria

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

11 posted 2002-01-05 06:45 PM

He's smiling...

Sven

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12 posted 2002-01-06 10:57 PM

more than I can see. . . I know that they're there. . . I'll have to read it again GS. . . and I know that Bill would have loved it. . .

thank you. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Greeneyes

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In Your Poetic Mind

13 posted 2002-01-06 11:04 PM

Muskrat love
let's make love
I swear
Because you love me
The keeper of the stars
I'm amazed by you
I would give everything
because life's a dance
sitting on the dock of the bay.
When you need me I'll be there
crazy for loving you
faithfully

I am sure there is a few I missed, you have some great songs here and of course this brings back memories of a wonderful person....thanks

Lauren~

Tomorrow's another day
and I'm thirsty any way
so bring on the rain

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

14 posted 2002-01-07 12:39 PM

Yes what a wonderful way to express , I do think songs bring back so many memories .
I miss Bill daily , I remember around that time I also did about 3 poems with song titles , Bill was an inspiration
Hope

Gentle Spirit
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15 posted 2002-01-07 06:14 AM

Bill was a wonderful inspiration. Thanks all for your replies. There are as best to my count 35 songs included in here. Glad you all enjoyed. *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Larry C

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16 posted 2002-01-29 01:36 AM

Gentle Spirit,
Don't stay away too long. I'll bump these for you since you can't post and it will kind of seem you're here. Miss ya sweetie...

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

17 posted 2002-01-29 05:37 PM

Ah Larry, my big brother!! I miss everyone.
Am fine, just so short on time!! Thanks so ever much for thinking of me!! Hugs.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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