Open Poetry #18 |
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Beyond The End |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan ![]() |
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Hidden amongst life's shadows in the ebb of conscious being lies a place without time and a time without place all knowing and all seeing when the road of life has reached it's end where footsteps trod no more at the gateway to eternity a place where spirits soar in the boundless sweep of forever where time and space can't be explained ruled by light and justice where peace and beauty reign at the crossroads of past and future lives insight too vast to comprehend are the echoes of souls at peace resting forever, beyond the end |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
"beyond the end is another beginning"..nice write ![]() |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lyra, Absolutely incredible. Into the library it goes. I totally love this. So inspiring. Wow. Thanks. ![]() |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
I agree with Larry, Lyra.. this is truly inspirational ![]() Pepper |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Lyra, this has real healing powers. Thank you. For every end here there must be a beginning somewhere else, even when we cannot see or feel it. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Lyra, a circle write with no end or beginning...how absolutely superb. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write ![]() |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lyra, You know every time I open that door I find myself looking into a mirror. LOL Your poem is a delight. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
A spendit poem, Madame! One of you finest. ![]() -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is wonderful. Much enjoyed. Sandra |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (sigh) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, yes, there is always a beginning in every end, and the possibilities and hopes are endless! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lyra, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautifully done!!!! Charisma |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Martin, Keth...and Kacy,thanks so much for your replies, and I hope that you are right, about there being another beginning beyond the end. That would be a very comforting thought, indeed. ![]() Larry and Pepper...I'm so glad that I wrote something that inspired you. That makes me feel empowered. ![]() Sue, Vandana, Sy, Newell, Sandra, Noah, and Charisma......thank you all for your wonderful replies. ![]() copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
A nice place to be, at the gateway of eternity. You've got such a talented pen and a beautiful mind to go with it. |
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PearlsB4Swine Member
since 2002-02-01
Posts 130where the heart finds me |
is there a Heaven's gate, where all souls are equal in Eyes, where peace is commonplace, and where love is abundant? You must have seen it to write so beautifully about it. Take me next time, will you? ![]() PB4S |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Lyra - Beautiful writing. This is beyond good. ![]() Dave |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Wow!! I sure hope you're right!!! ![]() |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Lyra~ F A N T A S T I C~ a keeper....HUGS Lauren~ Step through the |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Lyra..From the heavens to us...given by you. This is beautiful.. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Very nice Lyra, Simply beautiful and inspiring.One of your best. ![]() Floria |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
WOW!Bravo!I absolutely love this and the picture as well.Am adding this to my library. Peaches |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Lyra darling girl, this is without doubt one of your utter best. You know that this is utterly wonderful don’t you, the flow and the metre are just perfect Such an inspiring and wonderful piece of writing, I’ve read fabulous pieces from you before this is simply stunning. Truly you’ve outdone yourself today jack: ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Somehow I became calmly serene after reading this ![]() 1derful write! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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