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On the Crest of A Wave
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On the Crest of A Wave |
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quietwaters Junior Member
since 2002-02-04
Posts 30delray beach, florida |
On the Crest of a Wave Often i wonder why I turn myself into parched words inside a bottle, wait for someone not thirsty enough to cork me in and cast me out to sea... Often I ask the wind why my life is so short on time, but so long on desperation, that I must flit from one heedless ear to another, until I learn to emasculate And accept sincerity in ever smaller doses... That is until tomorrow comes, when a breeze from seaward knocks a lemon branch against my salt-sprayed window pane - now an amalgam of glass and hope - and wakes me up to thought-free running... To a sand dune where I sit against a sunbeam or two... Perhaps to taste the quality of my own abstract hungers... or merely to watch for a corkhead bobbing to my shore, on the crest of a wave.... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Sooooooooo wonderfully said, sweet friend, may all your dreams and desires come to you as messages in bottles and may you always find true happiness of sincerity and truth! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ray, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Often I ask the wind why my life is so short on time, but so long on desperation, that I must flit from one heedless ear to another, until I learn to emasculate And accept sincerity in ever smaller doses... That is until tomorrow comes, when a breeze from seaward knocks a lemon branch against my salt-sprayed window pane - now an amalgam of glass and hope - and wakes me up to thought-free running... To a sand dune where I sit against a sunbeam or two..." This is so completely amazing. You have a great style! |
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quietwaters Junior Member
since 2002-02-04
Posts 30delray beach, florida |
thank you very much SEA... english is my second language, i am still learning how to "sing" with it... again, thanks! ray |
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