Open Poetry #18 |
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Taking A Chance |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now ![]() |
“TAKING A CHANCE” by Bill Charles ~~~~ I loaned you my heart, and you placed it inside yours… You loaned me your heart, and I placed it inside mine… Taking a chance, for each other… ~~~~ |
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Fee Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 381Melbourne, Australia |
This is so beautifuly written. It is so special to be able to trust someone enough to be able to loan them the most important thing we own. I love it so much, you have touched me so deeply. Thank you. Hugs Fee Expressions, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I would do this for you..even if.... M |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
How would we ever know the feeling if we didn't take the chance! Life is not without risks, and there are many worth taking... and of course there are the ones we wish we could take back. It's all part of the plan I suppose. I loved what you wrote BC~ |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Bill, very touching and very true words.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
....simply beautiful.... ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, everyone always has to start somewhere, and the first time someone makes you feel so happy, it is always worth trying to touch their heart forever! (big hugggssssss) Your loving heart flows with true love, sweet friend, I wish you eternal happiness always, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Bill~ oh wow, from this it does seem it was worth it...LOVELY Lauren~ Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into the shadows of my heart [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-06-2002 11:15 PM).] |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Ah Bill, how timely this message is right now. Yes, some chances are worth taking aren’t they? Always worth taking the chance, where love is the reward. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Bill,short and sweet. ![]() ![]() Juanita |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* such a simple thing..yet that is the way love starts...by taking a chance with the heart. I love it..**big hugs** ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Hey Bill...me, too! |
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