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Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2002-02-06 09:03 PM


“TAKING A CHANCE”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
I loaned you
my heart, and
you placed it
inside yours…

You loaned me
your heart, and
I placed it
inside mine…

Taking a chance,
for each other…
~~~~



© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
Fee
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since 2000-08-07
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1 posted 2002-02-06 09:22 PM


This is so beautifuly written. It is so special to be able to trust someone enough to be able to loan them the most important thing we own.
I love it so much, you have touched me so deeply.

Thank you.
Hugs Fee

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2002-02-06 09:48 PM


I would do this for you..even if....

M

BluesSerenade
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3 posted 2002-02-06 09:49 PM


How would we ever know the feeling
if we didn't take the chance!

Life is not without risks, and there are many worth taking...
and of course there are the ones we wish we could take back.  
It's all part of the plan I suppose.  
I loved what you wrote BC~    

Magnus
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4 posted 2002-02-06 09:51 PM


Bill,  very touching and very true words..
Enchantress
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5 posted 2002-02-06 10:00 PM


....simply beautiful....

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Mistletoe Angel
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6 posted 2002-02-06 11:09 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, everyone always has to start somewhere, and the first time someone makes you feel so happy, it is always worth trying to touch their heart forever! (big hugggssssss) Your loving heart flows with true love, sweet friend, I wish you eternal happiness always, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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7 posted 2002-02-06 11:13 PM


Bill~

oh wow, from this it does seem it was worth it...LOVELY


Lauren~


Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-06-2002 11:15 PM).]

Tracey
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8 posted 2002-02-06 11:14 PM


Ah Bill, how timely this message is right now. Yes, some chances are worth taking aren’t they?  Always worth taking the chance, where love is the reward.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

N orth Carolina Girl
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9 posted 2002-02-07 09:56 AM


Bill,short and sweet.




Juanita

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Startime
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10 posted 2002-02-07 02:08 PM


*sigh* such a simple thing..yet that is the way love starts...by taking a chance with the heart. I love it..**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Duncan
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11 posted 2002-02-07 04:17 PM


Hey Bill...me, too!
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