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Under The Shadow of the Moon (duet by Startime and Bill Charles)
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Under The Shadow of the Moon (duet by Startime and Bill Charles) |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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“Under The Shadow of the Moon” by Karen Torbiak & Bill Charles ~~~~ Hand in hand they walk the sun warmed sand watching, as it paints the evening sky It's blaze matches what their hearts demand of passions flame they can't deny Fingers entwined just walking with rays Gazing into eyes sparkling with delight Sun fiery, as the warmth of your touch Horizon dimmer, into the twilight Velvet darkness moves across the beach veiling two lovers locked in embrace No longer is this a time for speech when from a burning kiss their hearts race Shadows flow into the sandy darkness Blending into themselves, closer they Whispers to ears with tones to be heard Lips meeting, emotions of a bouquet As she cuddles in his arms she sighs while listening to his strong heartbeat She smiles as she see the moon rise knowing there's all night to feel complete Tighter she is held in enchantment Knowing of his heart and feelings Ecstasy of moonbeams touch her face In the twilight she has awakenings She stays within his arms for a night Under the shadow of the moon She'll leave with the coming light Thirsty no more, love is immune Sleep eluding, yet this morning light Comes for lovers in their rainbow Alone now, but for the memories Of loving you, with all to follow… Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is spectacular...You two work very well together. I loved this one.  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Auguste 
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Congrats to both of you on a very wonderful post. You make a great time and I so enjoyed this.  Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
MC....Thank you...and this graphic is perfectly stunning...I loved writing this with Bill...he is such a romantic poet and he always manages to weave magical spells with his words...This poem had me sighing as I read the way he put it all together...Thank you...**big hugs** Auguste...I am so glad you enjoyed it...I really enjoyed writing it with him....and the beach was the perfect setting. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Wonderful writing you two! |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Lovely job by the both of you.Enjoyed it! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  YAY!!! Ooohhhhhhh...this is soooooooo beautiful, I'm so proud of you both, this is sooooooooo lovely! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) We all love you both sooooooo much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Bill and Karen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
alot goes on within the shadows of the moon  nicely done bill and karen.. hugss ~Victoria~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! Karen and Bill!! YES!! You two du-et so well together! Just beautiful beneath the moonlight. ~Hugs to you both, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Karen~ Bill~ Wow you two this is fantastic!! I love it, so soft and tender....HUGS... Lauren~ Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into the shadows of my heart [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-07-2002 07:20 PM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Karen - the magic of your pen also came alive enhancing this write. I thank you for the inspiration to do this beautiful poem... BC |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Bill and Karen, this is a wonderful priceless write. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
you two make a forceful pair...soft and sensuous from beginning to end!!! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Karen and Bill Oh my I knew you were good, but I never knew you were this good. Do you know how good this really is? I mean the construction the flow the internal rhythm this is utterly stunning. As a single poem this would be wonderful as a duet it is perfect I love it you two I love it Absolutely first class writing  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*WOW* you two are amazing with your pen. LOVE this duet Charisma |
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