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RSWells
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0 posted 2002-02-07 12:12 PM



Callous clouds hung low,
their rein the bleak corral
that concrete, endless horizon
and undark consider a February day.

Hunger and alone huddled then
broke for the Chinese buffet.
At least one would be deferred.

The innocent beginning, a white
tablecloth. The indoor fountain
pools, our affair's baptismal
font from which but one seems
to have emerged.

The instant warmth of the
egg drop soup nearly brings tears.
Starvation lay in a bed of fried rice
and variety lusted in sweet and sour
pork, chicken and shrimp.

Steamed broccoli and mushrooms
play soft and subtle texture
between teeth. Fried dumplings
and cheese puffs in fullness
massaged gums then reposed
below deck, ballast for the
balance of the day's journey.

Hot tea from a tiny handleless
cup finally warmed even weary bones
and innards where until now only
a lone heart stay faithful, temperate
and humane like a blazing hearth
in a vast, dark and shuttered room.

Reflection snapped by the fortune cookie
which stated on one side, against
overwhelming odds;
7 12 23 39 42 46
it's reverse whispered a less likely
"You will be Loved deeply".

"Happy people have no history" - French Proverb

© Copyright 2002 Richard S. Wells jr. - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-07 12:14 PM



About time you came home, Master Poet...it's been far too long to keep me from enjoying verse like this...

and well done, I might add....

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with you
2 posted 2002-02-07 12:15 PM


ok, I am really hungry now

Good to see you posting again

Startime
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3 posted 2002-02-07 12:17 PM


Oh gosh...so good to see your words gracing these blue pages again....This poem made me hungry for both such a meal and the love that seemed to be missing...*sigh* an inner hunger and desire of the heart within the heart....Magnificent....**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

BluesSerenade
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4 posted 2002-02-07 12:20 PM


This is certainly food for thought,
not to mention the good fortune!
Enjoyed the combination very much.

*superb*

Irish Rose
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5 posted 2002-02-07 12:27 PM


It is so good go read your poetry once more, this is exceptional.  

Kathleen--(Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee



Nan
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6 posted 2002-02-07 01:06 PM


What better fortune could one ask for...?... So nice to see you here, Richard.. and bringing us such wondrous words as well..
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7 posted 2002-02-07 01:41 PM


Welcome home, wayfaring stranger, where warm replies are but an appetizer to the main course, compassionate friendship. And why is it that I am suddenly thirsty for hot Chai tea?
RSWells
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8 posted 2002-02-07 02:47 PM


Thank you kind friends for the warm return. I've been stuck in a blue place (not pages) and hopefully will have a presence again.
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9 posted 2002-02-07 02:53 PM


Hot tea from a tiny handleless
cup finally warmed even weary bones
and innards where until now only
a lone heart stay faithful, temperate
and humane like a blazing hearth
in a vast, dark and shuttered room.
=====================================

This serves proof that there is poetry everywhere, when we open our minds to it.
SO? all I had to do was ask? it was that easy? *L*
yes....was a pleasure to wander in and find your name here today.
To your postscript ... play the numbers...and never doubt the possibilities...for just like the poetry...things can be found when we are open to it

You speak to me in riddles and you speak to me in rhymes.
My body aches to breathe your breath ... your words keep me alive.

~Sarah McLachlan~

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10 posted 2002-02-07 03:25 PM


  Today is our lottery, so will use your numbers Richard and split it with you if I win, how's that? (and you know I would)  You can even make a Chinese dinner into something spectacular, and it is sooooo good to see you writing again.  Now off to get a ticket!

The older I grow, the less important the comma becomes.  Let the reader
catch his own breath."
~Elizabeth Clarkson Zwart~


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Canada eh.
11 posted 2002-02-07 03:40 PM


WOW!  So good to see you posting here again Richard!  I have never heard Chinese food sound so inviting.  Welcome home!
Hugs~Nancy

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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12 posted 2002-02-07 03:54 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh my gosh, now I am flooding with tears, we've all missed you soooooo much, it's so great to see you again! (big hugggssssss) My heart cries out to everyone who has struggled this way but yet I know deep down love will come to them all and their answers will come to their questions! God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Richard, thank you for sharing!


May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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