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Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

0 posted 2002-02-07 04:30 AM

Oh how the time will pass in hours before you.
I can't sleep for thinking of your voice
and dreams of you aren't enough to suffice for this ache.
This is for you because I am roaming
and my feet are tired
and this is a request for you to pick me up
and carry me for a little while.
I'll feel my body bend to the strong of your hands
and weep no more while your heart holds me.
Do think of me now and then, My Love
because once in the while I still dream of other voices
those haunting nevers that cease to torment
my submissive memory world.
All the what if's are hitting me a force I cannot sail smoothly against.
I feel not just mere storms coming on
but feel monsters of rage kicking waves in my face
and I am blinded by the salt of tears
pooling in my eyes
reddening them.
The mast of peace has been conquered tonight by those bullying hurricanes of heart that misses the mate to its soul.
Shhh..
I'm roaming now into your room
and curling atop you for comfort
listening to the soft low snore of deep sleep
chasing all my bad thoughts away while I share your pillow.
Can you feel me dusting your dreams?
If I am to dronw, my love,
then give me your hand
and pull me into more familiar waters
so that I may be buried in the grave of your passion
not in the liquid salt of doubt.

For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2002-02-07 04:35 AM

You ramble well at 4:30 in the morning, and I loved the idea of dusting his dreams, neat line Jenn.

The older I grow, the less important the comma becomes. Let the reader
catch his own breath."
~Elizabeth Clarkson Zwart~

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

2 posted 2002-02-07 07:27 AM

In shades of yesteryear's ramblings...

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-02-07 08:10 AM

Awwwwwwww, this is so beautiful, sweet friend, you always ramble the most beautiful and romantic visions of all, such passion always fills your wonderful words! Together may you dust each others dreams and reveal a spick-and-span love bound to last forever, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jenn, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2002-02-07 08:15 AM

Jenn,
A wonderful write and I enjoyed the same line
Can you feel me dusting your dreams?

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

5 posted 2002-02-07 09:24 AM

"salt of doubt" is a wonderful phrase, I enjoyed the entire piece.

Kathleen--(Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

6 posted 2002-02-07 11:58 AM

These don't seem too mindless to me, they seem very well thought.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

7 posted 2002-02-07 12:03 PM

WOW!!!For a ramble you sure do a magnificent job...this is a stunning poem...I love it. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2002-02-10 08:17 PM

like I said earlier. . . very deep and insightful. . .

excellent. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Dulcinea
Senior Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
IN

9 posted 2002-02-10 08:26 PM

If I am to drown, my love,
then give me your hand
and pull me into more familiar waters
so that I may be buried in the grave of your passion
not in the liquid salt of doubt.

I especially enjoyed these lines, very poetic, and wonderful images! Nicely done!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

10 posted 2002-02-10 08:31 PM

The mast of peace has been conquered tonight by those bullying hurricanes of heart that misses the mate to its soul.
Shhh..

Hmmmm ....what a voice you have!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

11 posted 2002-02-10 09:07 PM

Gosh Jenn....I do wish you would teach me how to ramble! LOl...this is great stuff.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

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