Open Poetry #18 |
Eros Bound |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eros Bound ~*Marge Tindal*~ Flight of wing Eros bound taking hearts in surround Holding on not letting go hearts are drawn in cupid's bow Friends in making No love untold held in arms tender fold This I am soft-hearted friend Holding love tender until the end Aiming for the heart~ From a long-time-ago challenge~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (02-07-2002 04:40 AM).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marge, this got me right through the heart and made me think all in one. Write om Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
A beautifully written poem, Marge. Thanks for sharing. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Indeed you are, m'lady... and I'm smilin' for you... |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
I am sure your arrow hit its mark, Marge. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
Marg, you have a way with a bow and arrow... Straight for the heart A loving, passionate touch. Maggie |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Marge...This is wonderful! I don't care if it is a repost, I never saw it before and it's great! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
straight to the target it has reached, i guess, it's beautiful, Marge.... |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Straight from the heart and straight to the heart. God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Always! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: This one will surely reap a lot of Valentines! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
A Valentine's blessing, to be sure! |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Bullseye. Well done Marge. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Hmmmmm looks familiar Marge, LOL, enjoyed reading this today. floria Floria |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Very lovely Marge~ HUGS Lauren~ Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into the shadows of my heart [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-07-2002 07:11 PM).] |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is so sweet, Marge. I like the way you did this. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thanks everyone ... this one got by me without responding to your lovely replies~ I apologize .... been busy in this 'big love' ... sometimes a gal just loses her train of thought ...~ This WAS a fun piece to do ... but a wench to format and get it to line up correctly ... had to post it blindly as it didn't want to give me a preview~ Glad to know it was enjoyed~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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