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Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2002-02-07 02:53 AM

Cinders Of Remember
~*Marge Tindal*~

When foreverly speaks your name
I'm held suspended in the fire
Sparking with flames of burning desire
Loving you once again~

Sparks in rise from ashen embers
Flaming into sweet remember
When touched by whispered winds
Of loving you once again~

The cinders of remember
were waiting to be fanned
Breezed into a consuming fire
Ah, yes ... loving you once again~

~For my special fella
February 2002

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

1 posted 2002-02-07 07:51 AM

Just a slight breeze - that's all they needed to burn brightly again...

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2002-02-07 07:54 AM

Marge,
Make sure he gets to read it but before he does I'll sneak in a

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-02-07 08:59 AM

Marge, I'm sure he will love this one!
I know I do! ~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

N orth Carolina Girl
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 962
NC,USA

4 posted 2002-02-07 09:20 AM

Marge,beautifully romantic it sure sounds like love.

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

amigo
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since 2001-10-12

Posts 520
the earth school

5 posted 2002-02-07 09:43 AM

Whooooo.....Amigo prays to the Wind God...send it all to the Sunshine State of Florida...

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

6 posted 2002-02-07 09:50 AM

Loverly

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

7 posted 2002-02-07 09:56 AM

you have to know I love this

yes, this is so perfect

I love it when you foreverly

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

8 posted 2002-02-07 12:21 PM

This one leaves me with such a smile... for the poetic beauty... and even more for the flame that now burns foreverly from those old coals. *S*

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

9 posted 2002-02-07 12:37 PM

Nothing like fanning the flames all over again!
This is wonderfully warm and cozy~

and toasty too!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

10 posted 2002-02-07 12:52 PM

*Thank you all SO much~
I'm off and running in a few short little whiles ... hope to have computer access .. but if I don't .... know I think of you all~
Much love and appreciation to each of you~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

11 posted 2002-02-07 01:15 PM

Marge: Sometimes dreams do come true and we get a second chance at love! Glad it's happening for you!

Betty Lou Hebert

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

12 posted 2002-02-07 01:38 PM

*sigh* your love for him consumes you is such a passionate way...I love it!!! I LOVE IT!!!**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

13 posted 2002-02-07 02:09 PM

Beautiful and passionate, Marge...I'm sure that your special fello will love this.

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

14 posted 2002-02-07 10:58 PM

This is just beautiful, Marge. I know your fella with like it.

The Rusty Knight
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 414
Texas

15 posted 2002-02-07 11:01 PM

Love this poem *S* Passionate...warm....hummmm I am dazed by the blaze

Dan

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

16 posted 2002-02-11 11:27 AM

The cinders of remember
were waiting to be fanned
Breezed into a consuming fire
Ah, yes ... loving you once again~

==================================
ah yes....

love is an uplifting thing eh!

very nice margie..

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"and i'd give up forever to touch you..cause i know you can feel me somehow..." -googoo dolls

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

17 posted 2002-02-11 12:07 PM

Just beautiful and oh I love the title. great poem Marge,

floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Dee
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since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

18 posted 2002-02-11 04:25 PM

Marge, your work always touches me in some way. This is so tender and beautiful. I love it.
I have been trying to send you an email but keep getting them back again. Can you e me please?

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

19 posted 2002-02-11 04:31 PM

I'm foreverly thinking your name when I think of clever and unique poetry! Fan those cinders of remember into the fire and write write write the passion....Hey baby! I'll read it everytime!

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

20 posted 2002-02-11 05:42 PM

toasting
the heat
of memory

well done ms m

brianbeaudry
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since 2001-07-20

Posts 410
Northern Ontario Canada

21 posted 2002-02-11 05:50 PM

This is so sweet Marge, I don't think the flames need much fanning LOL

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

22 posted 2002-02-15 01:07 AM

Marge-
I love it when you write of 'foreverly'.
Smiling with you, my friend.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

23 posted 2002-02-15 01:28 PM

I love the way you use language. Wonderful poem.

Nan

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

24 posted 2002-02-18 09:37 PM

BettyLou~
Me too~

StarTime~
Thanks so much, gal~

Lyra~
Thank you~
I think he's kinda special~

SmartChick~
Hugs, gal~
Thanks bunches~

Dan~
Thanks ever so much~

DG~
Yeahhhhhh ! Thank you sweetie~

Floria~
Awwwww .. I appreciate that~

Dee~
What a lovely reply ... thanks hon~
I hope my ISP gets the e-mail thingie straightened out~

ETHome~
Hey you !!!! Thanks bookoodles~

DarkStranger~
Awwww, I appreciate the reply~

BrianB~
Ahhhhh ... thanks so much~

Vicky~
*Hugs* to you gal~
I'm foreverly in this BIG LOVE~

Pilgrimage~
Thank you for such a lovely compliment~

*You are ALL the greatest !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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