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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-02-06 02:12 AM



One Rose Away From Loving You
*~Marge Tindal*~


Borne on wings of petaled rose
the love I have grows and grows
Reaching places within my heart
that will not let your memory part
Petals falling open-faced, laced with
beauty they represent my love sent
Their fragrance reaching far into the
night, touching noses with delight
Far away, you must know,
delight sent wafting
on this rose

~just one~
~rose~
~l~
~l~
~away~ l ~from~
~loving ~you~
~~~l~~~
~l~
l
l
l
l
~l~
l
l



*A specially-ordered re-potting from the archives of my heart
Just in time for Valentine's Day 2002



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
   noles1@totcon.com   

[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (02-06-2002 10:09 AM).]

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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2002-02-06 03:24 AM


Marge, I long ago told the boyfriend to stop buying me roses for valentine's day...instead he buys me rose BUSHES...(he can't write like you!) This is a morseled candy of a valentine rose....I am so happy for you!
Dee
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2 posted 2002-02-06 03:27 AM


Marge, you deserve roses

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

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3 posted 2002-02-06 08:43 AM


I like this, and it is presented so well, too.
Sandra

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2002-02-06 09:08 AM


Marge,
Delightful,

amigo
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5 posted 2002-02-06 09:37 AM


Beautiful, Marge, i like it...
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6 posted 2002-02-06 10:11 AM


Marge, not only a good writer, but you are so darned creative. floria

Floria

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But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

ethome
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7 posted 2002-02-06 10:19 AM


Beautiful Marge!

I got confused at first and thought we were going to have a drink of wine but then I opened me eyes and read this and can't tell you have much I like it!  I really do!

The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up
spaces of consciousness and resistance; to language oppressions; to
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8 posted 2002-02-06 11:11 AM


your creative forms are always so neat, but the poetry within the shape is always beautiful!
Nan
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9 posted 2002-02-06 11:12 AM


Well, you CERTAINLY are managing to maintain your superior work & presentations - in spite of the graphic quota... This is GREAT, m'friend...
Bill Charles
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10 posted 2002-02-06 12:34 PM


Marge - you do write some beautiful poetry..

BC

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11 posted 2002-02-06 12:39 PM


oh gosh, Marge this is absolutely stunning. I so love your shape and color poems...your talent is amazing. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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12 posted 2002-02-06 01:03 PM


Serenity~
I thank you, sweetie~
My fella just happens to grow these beauties~

Dee~
Awwww, thank you hon~

CatalinaMoon~
I'm really pleased to know you enjoyed it~

Seymour~
And so are you~

Amigo~
Thank you so much sweetie~

Floria~
What a lovely thing to say~
I thank you~

ETHome~
Ah, the rose within your view
contains a sip of morning dew~
Thank you, sweetie~

SEA~
It honestly all starts out with the poetry,
and suddenly it seeps into it's own shape~
I just love it when that happens !
Thanks, gal~

Nan~
Where there's a will .. there's a poet with a palette~
Thank you, my friend~

BillCharles~
Thank you so very much~

StarTime~
Aw shucks~
I just love sharing these little thoughts with you~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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13 posted 2002-02-06 04:39 PM


Marge,this was beautiful and I loved the rose design.




Juanita

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Marge Tindal
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NorthCarolinaGirl~
And me WUV THAT WITTLE BUNNYKINS to pieces~
Thank you soooooo much~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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15 posted 2002-02-06 04:56 PM


Marge:  Very pretty and did you have someone special in mind?  I'll just bet you did!

Betty Lou Hebert

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16 posted 2002-02-06 05:38 PM


WOW - gorgeous - really lovely. I especially love the title/last line. It is so prettily presented also.

...and her crown was formed by the ice in her eyes

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17 posted 2002-02-06 07:30 PM


Marge... I always look forward to reading your poems. I always expect something beautiful, and you never fail to meet expectations every time! Beautiful, the rose, the poem, everything!

Bec

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-Winnie-the-Pooh

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18 posted 2002-02-06 07:35 PM


Marge, your poems are heavenly flowers in bloom. Thanks for picking this special one to prepare us for Valentines day.
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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19 posted 2002-02-06 07:46 PM


So pretty Marge~  
I'm glad you re-potted this!
Truly it blooms with the fragrance of love.

Marge Tindal
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20 posted 2002-02-06 10:42 PM


BettyLou~
I think you just may be right~
Thanks sweet friend~

IceQueen~
Thank you so very much~

Bec~
What a very, very nice thing to say~
I thank you, hon~

SilverStreak~
Thank you~

BluesSerenade~
Thanks gal ... my green thumb was just itching to get it done~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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21 posted 2002-02-06 11:02 PM


Marge as an avid rose grower This finds a special place with me...a lovely rose without the thorns...I am not one rose from love, I am one more rose bush from filling the garden. *S*

Dan

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Marge~

A lovely tender rose, you have placed upon these pages...   HUGS


Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

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23 posted 2002-02-06 11:04 PM


Hi Marge--Do you want a job in a flower shop?  I know one that would love you, and it pays in roses.  Hugs!
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24 posted 2002-02-06 11:22 PM


Marge, This is perfect...just perfect.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Marge Tindal
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25 posted 2002-02-06 11:30 PM


Dan~
Ohhhhh, I'm so glad you like it~
Thank you so much for letting me know~

GreenEyes~
I am really glad to share it with you~
Thank you, my friend~

Martie~
Now THAT'S the best offer I've had today !
YES ... wouldn't that be fun ?
I just wish .... oh, how I wish ...

Enchantress~
Gosh ... I'm so pleased that everyone is finding it so enjoyable~
Thank you sweetie~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (02-06-2002 11:33 PM).]

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26 posted 2002-02-07 11:12 PM


This is beautiful, Marge. I like the way you did this.
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27 posted 2002-02-10 12:01 PM


This is wonderful Marge.

We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles

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28 posted 2002-02-11 11:20 AM


very nice valentine miss margie..

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"and i'd give up forever to touch you..cause i know you can feel me somehow..." -googoo dolls

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29 posted 2002-02-15 01:02 AM



Marge-
You know how much I'm loving this page from
your coloring book.
Absolutely perfect!
Happy Valentine's Day!
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Marge Tindal
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30 posted 2002-02-18 09:26 PM


SmartChick~
Thank you SO MUCH~

EagleOne~
Thanks, sweet fella~

DG~
I thank you, gal~

Vicky~
Big *smiles* here, gal~
Happy ever-aftering to you too~
Love n' hugs~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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