Open Poetry #18 |
Innocence Lost |
Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Wrapped in a blanket of love on a dark stormy night our innocence stands in the way like a locked door without a key our halos crash into each other like bumper cars at an amusement park we whisper softly to each other tender words of love and kindness reveling in the nectar of our newborn feelings the passion hangs thickly over our heads like the Sword of Damocles just waiting to fall and to crush our innocence once and for all to smash it into tiny pieces and to scatter those invisible bits to the winds sprinkling them blithely around edges of the sky never again to be found for as our scarlet passion glows hotter and night's shadowy skies give way to dawn's crimson clouds our halos fade away and we leave our innocence behind |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Mmmmmmmm...this is both bittersweet and very beautiful at the same time, it is sad to see innocence is lost, but also sooooooo beautiful to share the heart of another in love and passion! (kiss on cheek) So beautifully sensual and wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! (sigh) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lyra, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Lyra, this is simply awesome.... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Wonderful expression of love that burns and fades. The last verse was especially moving and says it all. I enjoyed your thoughts very much~ Thanks |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Noah...thanks so much for your reply. It was love at first site for us...and that innocent love still burns bright. copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so much for your reply, Barry...this is about a true story...of David and myself. copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so much for taking the time to read my poem and reply to it, Blues Serenade. copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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