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A Mango Sun
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A Mango Sun |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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The sky is a robin’s egg blue nestled within clouds of champagne the dawn hatches brilliant hues a mango sun incubates the dawn bursting essence of a claret rose sweet petals bloom a purplish pink silvery mist kisses bluegrass with soft moistening lips of dew bathing gently butterflies wings of a periwinkle blue cappuccino dances in the breeze a new day like a baby robin born a sienna-breasted robin within the birdbath of the morn You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. -Ziggy [This message has been edited by Victoria (02-06-2002 09:40 PM).] |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Victoria Such stunning images you portrayed here, very cleverly written. Take care....Sue Suetang |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
very, very lovely Victoria...a painting's wash of word here. I felt like I was there...delicious! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
What beautiful imagery! I've always enjoyed your style of presenting life, and now, you've inspired my pen  Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, your lovely words always make me smile! (kiss on cheek) The beauty of spring sings in your heart, sweet friend, may the robin always fill you with glee and all of Mother Nature's creations! We all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sahring! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
sue..thank you so much sue..nice of you to peek in serenity..thank you..glad you enjoyed my words melissa..thank you and im very happy i inspired you.. noah..thank you..im always happy if i can make you smile dear noah hugs |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
A very fine poem from a fine poet beautifully put together. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
You had me there...marveling at its birth...alive in creation!!!!beautiful!!!!! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Another colorful and special write, Vic. Sandra |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you Daniel..i do appreciate your kind comments.. Brian..thank you Brian..and for peeking in tonight..glad you enjoyed sandra..thank you so much sandra..always nice to hear from you hon |
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