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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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Transpiring images superimposed sketched in subtle tones tracing you with my eyes closed outlining your silhouette a kaleidoscope of shapes and patterns transfers the moment caressing the movement a blend of shades details my thoughts memorizing the finer points drawing me to you visions to view behind closed eyes tracing you by heart~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  Awwwwww, this is so sweet and tender, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always make me smile! May you forever cherish the beauty of treue love and trace dreams and joys with joy always! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so uch, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
i can relate to this..easy to trace someone you love..from head to toe  ~Victoria~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Noah, thank you for leaving your gracious comments, always~ Victoria~ The mind is a continous work of art on paper, and we're all part of the picture. Different and the same. Thanks for reading. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I use to think I could trace the thoughts and finer points I held of him in my heart..but I think it all got erased over time.. very nicely done..must go now..I am late for a very important date..catch you tomorow *s hugssssss M |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BluesSerenade~ My ... this is simply lovely~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"memorizing the finer points drawing me to you visions to view behind closed eyes tracing you by heart~" stunning...... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
nt~ Thank you for your nice reply. Time erases a lot of things but it's still on our side. It certainly better be! Marge~ I'm glad you came by to read. I appreciate it very much. SEA~ Thanks a bunch for the 'stunning' reply. Always nice to hear from you SEA gal. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
BluesSerenade, I'd liked to be traced sometime! Wow...sensual write. I like this a lot. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Hey thanks Larry~ I was thinking the other day about something I knew by heart. Interesting how one thought/phrase leads to another and they work. It's all in the process. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Exactly...you have captured it! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
My mind works overtime when I close my eyes. Watch out now! Thanks Duncan~ |
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PearlsB4Swine Member
since 2002-02-01
Posts 130where the heart finds me |
It is always nice when you can close your eyes and envision the best life has to offer, nicely said. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
BluesSerenade, what a beautiful line is found in traced by heart. write on Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
PB4S~ I am not sure I am invisioning the very best, but there is a lot that comes to mind behind closed eyes. Thanks Kethry~ There are some things the heart just knows, I wouldn't want it any other way, least I ever forget. Thank you for reading. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is a lovely poem, Blues...I love tracing with my eyes.  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I have something to admit~ I've been wanting one of those animated inserts that you do! You always manage to find just the right one for each poem. I thank you Lyra for reading and leaving your special gift. I really do appreciate it. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This reads like a dream, and I love the thoughts. Sandra |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Once it was the best kind of dream come true. Thank you Sandra~ |
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