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BluesSerenade
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0 posted 2002-02-06 07:34 PM


Transpiring images
superimposed
sketched in subtle tones
tracing you with my eyes closed
outlining your silhouette
a kaleidoscope of shapes and patterns
transfers the moment
caressing the movement
a blend of shades
details my thoughts
memorizing the finer points
drawing me to you
visions to view behind closed eyes
tracing you by heart~



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1 posted 2002-02-06 07:38 PM




Awwwwww, this is so sweet and tender, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always make me smile! May you forever cherish the beauty of treue love and trace dreams and joys with joy always! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so uch, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-02-06 08:04 PM


i can relate to this..easy to trace someone you love..from head to toe

                 ~Victoria~

BluesSerenade
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3 posted 2002-02-06 09:20 PM


Noah, thank you for leaving your gracious comments, always~

Victoria~ The mind is a continous work of art on paper, and we're all part of the picture.  Different and the same.
  Thanks for reading.  

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2002-02-06 10:04 PM


I use to think I could  trace the thoughts and finer points I held of him in my heart..but I think it all got erased over time..

very nicely done..must go now..I am late  for a very important date..catch you tomorow *s

hugssssss
M

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5 posted 2002-02-06 10:24 PM


BluesSerenade~
My ... this is simply lovely~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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with you
6 posted 2002-02-06 10:32 PM


"memorizing the finer points
drawing me to you
visions to view behind closed eyes
tracing you by heart~"
stunning......

BluesSerenade
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7 posted 2002-02-07 12:48 PM


nt~ Thank you for your nice reply.
Time erases a lot of things
but it's still on our side.
It certainly better be!

Marge~ I'm glad you came by to read.
I appreciate it very much.

SEA~  Thanks a bunch for the 'stunning' reply.  Always nice to hear from you SEA gal.

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8 posted 2002-02-07 12:56 PM


BluesSerenade,
I'd liked to be traced sometime! Wow...sensual write. I like this a lot.

BluesSerenade
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9 posted 2002-02-07 01:09 AM


Hey thanks Larry~
I was thinking the other day about something I knew by heart.  
Interesting how one thought/phrase leads to another and they work.  
It's all in the process.  

Duncan
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10 posted 2002-02-07 01:48 AM


Exactly...you have captured it!
BluesSerenade
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11 posted 2002-02-07 11:58 AM


My mind works overtime when I close my eyes.  Watch out now!  

Thanks Duncan~

PearlsB4Swine
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12 posted 2002-02-08 07:31 AM


It is always nice when you can close your eyes and envision the best life has to offer, nicely said.
Kethry
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13 posted 2002-02-08 07:36 AM


BluesSerenade,
what a beautiful line is found in traced by heart.
write on
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



BluesSerenade
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14 posted 2002-02-08 11:28 AM


PB4S~  I am not sure I am invisioning the very best, but there is a lot that comes to mind behind closed eyes.  Thanks

Kethry~  There are some things the heart just knows,
I wouldn't want it any other way, least I ever forget.  
Thank you for reading.

Madame Chipmunk
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15 posted 2002-02-08 12:35 PM


This is a lovely poem, Blues...I love tracing with my eyes.

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

BluesSerenade
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16 posted 2002-02-08 02:07 PM


I have something to admit~
I've been wanting one of those animated
inserts that you do!  You always manage
to find just the right one for each poem.
I thank you Lyra for reading and leaving
your special gift.   I really do appreciate it.

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17 posted 2002-02-08 02:37 PM


This reads like a dream, and I love the thoughts.
Sandra

BluesSerenade
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18 posted 2002-02-08 03:18 PM


Once it was the best kind of dream come true.
Thank you Sandra~

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