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A Heart Etched In The Sand
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A Heart Etched In The Sand |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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A heart declaring our love Is etched upon the sand You and I are admiring our artwork As we stand here hand in hand The cold wind envelops our bodies But it doesn't bother me that much As I'll never really feel the cold If I have the warmth of your touch You wrap yourself around me And I'm imprisoned within your arms Your love surrounds me like a blanket Keeping me safe from any harm The seagulls hover above us As they search upon the land You kiss me so very passionately As the waves crash upon the sand So besotted we are in one another Our love is deeper than the sea Many hours of constant pleasure Is what you always give to me We hear the steady beating of wings As the seagulls take to the skies An expression of love and happiness Is what I see now in your eyes This day is almost over As the tide moves in so fast We knew our heart in the sand Could not be here to last But our love it has no boundaries Our two hearts are so content Never will we forget this day Or these treasured times we've spent Suetang |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...this is soooooooo breathtakingly beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always make me cry and smile, you are sooooooo romantic! (kiss on cheek) May you forever walk hand in hand by loves shore, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
a beautiful romantic day indeed..nicely written Sue dear..hugss ~Victoria~ |
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thepoeticplumber Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 185 |
This was a real pleasure to read Sue. And OH! Now I know what you look like. I finally saw your picture. What a nice caring smile you have. Now back to the poem. I was immediately drawn to the fact that the sand heart would vanish in time. But the love of the poem would be eternal. A great job as usual Sue. Your friend, Roger |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
I do love what you are saying in this. It is beautiful. alan |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sue, Way cool. Brings back some great memories. Nice thoughts and images here. Thanks. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Very nice write here sue, lots of feeling, lovely, floria Floria |
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