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cwebb
Junior Member

since 2002-01-19

Posts 34

0 posted 2002-02-06 08:20 AM

What We Had

Driving, today – a sudden flash of memory:

When you removed my woolen glove
to feel our palms meet
(in the winter dark of a parking-lot)

Your fingers… slid
(traced to base of thumb, those
mappings-down to chain my wrist.)
There in the dark - I trembled.

Still traveling this daily road – remembering

when we stopped
and moved into one another
(as we’d known we would
from the start, eyes leading inward,
and I saw your wanting)

one touch -

and time departed.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2002-02-06 08:38 AM

I think your memories are vey strong. It's hard sometimmes, to be cursed with such perfect recall of moments gone, especially when they don't return. This is wonderfully descriptive.
Sandra

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2002-02-06 08:56 AM

Carol, this is wonderful with some terrific imagery here! Enjoyed this morning read!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-02-06 01:11 PM

(tears fall down my cheeks) So very sad but beautiful, sweet friend, sometimes such sweet memories can bring tears when the magic no longer exists, but there will always come those that are bound to enchant our hearts forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Carol, thank you for sharing!