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Soleil Noir
Senior Member

since 2001-12-19

Posts 688
USA

0 posted 2002-02-05 01:49 PM

All Good Things

He doesn’t see her, but she’s near
A silent call upon the breeze,
She is everything he holds dear,
For she has put him at such ease

If he thinks a bit too much
Of her smile, or her embrace
Or if he remembers her lightest touch
Or her winsome step of grace

Then he hungers for her, feels the pain
Of this love he would hold so tight,
And he would be with her again
To hold her through the night

She asks for naught, he would give all,
Just to see her glow again,
Her voice is captured in her call
Though she never asks where, or when.

She gives him all the space he needs
But he is waiting for the day
When to her he’ll readily speed
For she has shown him true love’s way

For this magnificent, awesome adoration
Was something he had never known,
And he will kiss her in celebration
When as two they make a home.

Soleil Noir
5 February 2002

peppermint35
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1106
Texas, USA

1 posted 2002-02-05 02:00 PM

Isn't that the way it always is.. the good appreciative ones are all taken!!! ::laughs::

A sweet, romantic write

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

inot2B
Member Elite

since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

2 posted 2002-02-05 02:13 PM

Beautifully written. Full of love, enjoyed very much.

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

3 posted 2002-02-05 02:24 PM

The flow of this is just wonderful, you have shown the depth of this love very well.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

4 posted 2002-02-05 02:28 PM

Soleil Noir,
what a write ...a voice in the night.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2002-02-05 02:38 PM

Soleil Noir - a beautiful write.

BC

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

6 posted 2002-02-05 02:43 PM

Oh my! Not only did I love this but reading it gave me so many mixed emotions. The obvious pangs of love in the state of idle, but moreso in this day and age, the contstant call of the unknown that really never exists if you do seek it out (the computer world I was referring to), gee, can you move this to the discussion area, I feel I have to ramble (next to Doreen I bet that was the longest sentence ever!) LOL.

It was a beautifully penned poem of course, but as usual, there were "to me" two sides to it if not more, so I shall take it and discuss it with myself.

~* Carpe' Diem *~

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

7 posted 2002-02-05 02:45 PM

Lovely!

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

8 posted 2002-02-05 03:12 PM

Awwwwwww, this is so sweet and lovely, love it!

Joanna

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2002-02-05 03:22 PM

....EXQUISITE....

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

10 posted 2002-02-05 05:55 PM

*sigh* and then you will both share all good things as love is the home you will build from your heart inside...I love this poem...Magnificent.**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

11 posted 2002-02-05 06:37 PM

(sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, your loving words build such a wonderful poem of true love bound to have a home in heaven forever! (big hugggsssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is soooooooooo beautiful, I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Soleil, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

12 posted 2002-02-05 06:48 PM

enjoy

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

13 posted 2002-02-06 10:13 PM

Fabulous expression...James

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

14 posted 2002-02-07 08:45 PM

This is a very lovely and special piece, dear Soleil - Very special indeed...

LngJhnAg
Member Elite

since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

15 posted 2002-02-08 11:16 AM

Sweetly written, and a lucky person it is who finds your love.

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