Open Poetry #18 |
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Prepare |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla ![]() |
Prepare A double saddle mounts today I have a place in mind to go It is only a dream away A Randy flight an hour or so Over mountains to valleys green Through shadows of nights darkest blue Through wind and rain and in between O’er the moon and its silver hew. It’s a flight that only we can make The compass in our minds will guide It’s a flight that we both must take The other side, mundane abides We’ve done it before we’ll do it again This haven where we come to stay It’s a den of love I made with a pen And a place where we both can play An oasis for thee and me Where we can sip our favorite tea. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Seymour, I am thinking of a lovely little butterfly who fancies Raspberry tea ![]() ![]() |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh seymour how very beautiful this is. Yes the havem, I love the haven. ![]() Floria |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Sy! This place sounds oh so pleasant! Can I stop in and have a cup of tea with you? I wouldn't want to interrupt anything though! Nice work as usual! |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mmmmmmmmm...my favorite teas are raspberry and mandarin orange, this is sooooooo gorgeous! (big hugggssssss) Your words are always so delightful to read, sweet friend, we all love you so much, this is a gorgeous vision! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
What a perfect retreat, Seymour...love the feel here, thanks for sharing... ![]() |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Over mountains to valleys green Through shadows of nights darkest blue Through wind and rain and in between O’er the moon and its silver hew. It's a flight that only we can make The compass in our minds will guide It's a flight that we both must take The other side, mundane abides We've done it before we'll do it again This haven where we come to stay It's a den of love I made with a pen And a place where we both can play =================================== I am like the perverbial boy or girl scout ... always ready ... always prepared. You know I'll fly with you anywhere ... can we go somewhere never before dared? I am packed and ready to take wing, I've brought along extra raspberry tea. We will sip on the shores of evermore you can paint the scene serene whilst I pen poetry. Name the time and the place...I'll be on time. Who could ever resist your invitation of rhyme divine. *winkiewinkie* ![]() ![]() |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Ah yes - A tea party - Sounds like a plan... Cute, Sy... ![]() |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
A very warm feeling with this one.Very nice! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Seymour - enjoyed your write. And a cup of tea sounds good, to me.... BC |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh gosh...I want to come too...can I have some ambrosia wine perhaps? I love it...**big hugs** ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
We're so glad you're home! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A beautiful fantasy flight, Sy...please save me a sip of that raspberry tea. But I am always dieting, so you can keep the burgers and fries. copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I don't really understand who Randy is..I occasionally see him in your writings..but I loved the feel of this : Over mountains to valleys green Through shadows of nights darkest blue Through wind and rain and in between O’er the moon and its silver hew. ..I think I shall be seeing this view tonight.. *s ~Wynter |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
loved this! I think I shall review once more & let imagination soar a journey no one else can see but the talented poet & me... *smiles* ~Tier |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
what a delightful poem, love it ![]() and.....eh love to have some tea too. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Know what I like BEST about this ???? 'This haven where we come to stay It’s a den of love I made with a pen' Yep ... that's it ... ![]() You're wonderful~ And that Randy dude is kinda cute too~ ![]() Love n' hugs~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Just got back and was overwhelmed by all the comments. I thank you all and send a big ![]() |
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