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Fee
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since 2000-08-07

Posts 381
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-02-06 12:43 PM

Crystal tears roll down my cheeks
to glisten in the light
How very careful I am
to keep them out of site

For Crystal tears are made
from shatters of the heart
Through thoughts of what
may never be
Yet still we let it start

So gently i turn away
to keep them out of view
For Crystal tears form inside
each time I think of you

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2002-02-06 01:39 AM

Excellent writing...James

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2002-02-06 01:42 AM

Fee - I have felt these tears also. YOu write words well about the hidden ones...

BC

Keith Morgan
Member

since 2001-10-29

Posts 114
Md

3 posted 2002-02-06 01:44 AM

Nicely written. A perfect poem for this special month.

Write from the soul and the words will flow

Fee
Member

since 2000-08-07

Posts 381
Melbourne, Australia

4 posted 2002-02-06 03:44 AM

Thank you for your kind words, I guess I just write what the heart tells me to.

Hugs Fee

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2002-02-06 10:22 AM

this is so me today....I love this

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

6 posted 2002-02-06 10:26 AM

Nice write Fee, I actually wrote a "Crystal Teardrops" not long ago, this is really nice. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-02-06 10:27 AM

(sigh) Sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, your gorgeous words flow with lovely tears that reflect the love of your heart and always light these pages! (kiss on cheek) I think we all have these tears every now and then, we all love you so much, this is beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Fiona, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

8 posted 2002-02-06 03:15 PM

these tears I have too felt time and time again. They say crying is therapeutic, but I rather not cry!! Great Write

Fee
Member

since 2000-08-07

Posts 381
Melbourne, Australia

9 posted 2002-02-06 09:16 PM

~Flora - Thanks. Sorry I missed your version of Crystal Teardrops. Forgive me for the same title ... must be great minds think alike.
I will make a point to go find yours and read it as well.

~ SEA - This is me always, I am glad that you could relate to it as well.. Hugs

~ Noah - As always your words are touching. Glad you liked.

~RosePetal - Tears cleans the soul and remind us to live - I agree with you though, most times I would rather not cry.

Thank you guys for being so loving.
Hugs to all.

Fee

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

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