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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon 
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You try to fight, but they take it from you, a piece at a time, until all that is left is an intangible feeling that nothing will ever be right again. © 2/5/2002 And I lie |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I know this feeling very well, my friend...I applaud you for stating this so eloquently! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Gary, this is so very sad, I have felt this way many times before as a young child growing up, where bullies would beat me up and I feel I would never be free and achieve my destiny and this would be my lifestyle and I would have nothing to hope for anymore! (sad sigh) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, this is a wonderful poem, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gary, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
you say so much in a small amount of words! I'm glad to see you posting in here sweetie, I love your poems. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I can identify... just remember, once you're down, there's nowhere but up... Well done! ~Tier |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
A very powerful write...glad I did not miss it. |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
I think humor is the cure-all, so all I can say is...When they beat you into lying down in submission, grab the remote control and turn on cable!!! |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Jonas, So powerful with so little words. I can relate well to this.. it is a place I find myself in way to often. Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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