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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2002-02-05 06:45 PM

you brought a swan as your champion
and wore white with lace
to adorn the shyness
of your eyes

I brought a falcon as my legion
and wore black leather
with dark ink
my skin was worldly

we danced our hours with unintention
you were afraid to sooth my edges
and bless me pure
lest I would deflower you

and wear your scent
on my beard
as a badge of instinct
with only perhaps a memory

when morning came
you whispered your spell poems
and dressed in your leather garter
you left the lace off your charms

gave them to the morning eyes
with the glory of their bareess
you made white sleeves for me
and bid me stay as your poet knight

darkness with a sword but without the urge
to impale another for their shimmer
or kill their swan for my sport
and of my falcon you asked?

he is white in feather
standing tall on yon roost
his shadow casts long the ground
to protect the innocent white eyes

of your soot feathered champion

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2002-02-05 06:51 PM

WOW!!!This poem sizzles with unleashed passion....You do have a sensually powerful way of writing...You touch the hiden places of dark passion when you write your poems...*big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2002-02-05 06:55 PM

"you brought a swan as your champion
and wore white with lace
to adorn the shyness
of your eyes

I brought a falcon as my legion
and wore black leather
with dark ink
my skin was worldly

we danced our hours with unintention
you were afraid to sooth my edges
and bless me pure
lest I would deflower you

and wear your scent
on my beard
as a badge of instinct
with only perhaps a memory"

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhha,
such heat....
have missed your words last few days..

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-02-05 07:12 PM

(sigh) Yopur gorgeous words always make me smile, sweet friend, this is sooooooo beautifully graceful! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, this is dreamy! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

4 posted 2002-02-05 07:44 PM

DS~

Wearing leather dancing upon velvet....vivid images for the eyes to enjoy....

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

5 posted 2002-02-05 07:50 PM

A poet Knight. Oh how I love this Dark Stranger, great poem. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-02-05 08:41 PM

Oh my Dark Stranger....love the way you write....and the subjects you write about.

~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

7 posted 2002-02-05 11:01 PM

Oooh-la-la, gotta love it, I love reading your words, you've got real talent! Love it!

Joanna

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2002-02-06 01:20 PM

Thanks to all of you...sorry about the delay in reply, (net problems) I appreciate each of you very much.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2002-02-06 04:41 PM

DarkStranger~
A spellbinding read~
Totally mesmerizing~

'we danced our hours with unintention'

Ooooooh, I like this thought~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

10 posted 2002-02-06 04:43 PM

I feel like I've read a novel. You have it all here, and I like it very much.

Nan

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

11 posted 2002-02-06 04:51 PM

Marge, thank you
it is intended to show the circle
of change when forces or lovers
exchange places
unintending to change that is..

Pilgrimage, thank you for reading my
book..(grin)

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

12 posted 2014-01-31 10:01 AM

As you have graced these blue pages with over 2000 poems, there is still the chance (or the certainty

) that I might find unread poems and this one was new for me. Spectacular write, dear D., written 12 years ago, wow. Your talent is very very solid, you see.

Margherita

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