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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-02-05 04:56 PM

my immortal soul
flies me safely to heaven
leaving shell behind

Inspired by:Immortal Soul

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (02-05-2002 04:57 PM).]

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

1 posted 2002-02-05 04:59 PM

Sooooooo gorgeous, your words are gorgeous always! Love it sweetie!

Joanna

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

2 posted 2002-02-05 05:14 PM

*sigh* gently you fly to heaven finally free of earthly restraints...BRAVO!! **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2002-02-05 05:15 PM

InterLoper~
Your ink complements Elizabeth's quilling very nicely~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2002-02-05 05:23 PM

RosePetal ~
You make me {blush}

Startime ~
Love those hugz

Marge ~
I was slightly daunted. I'm glad you think so

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (02-05-2002 05:25 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-02-05 06:22 PM

(sigh) Your gorgeous words are always so heavenly, sweet friend, this is sheer poetic beauty! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Interloper, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2002-02-05 06:34 PM

your immortal soul
a cherished gift from heaven
I'll love you always

~*~

your immortal soul
flies heavenward, leaving me
I will join you soon

~*~

your immortal soul
gifted once again to mine
bound in heaven's love

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2002-02-05 06:49 PM

enjoyed

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

8 posted 2002-02-05 07:20 PM

that's what happens the shell stays behind...neat, keep it up

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

9 posted 2002-02-05 07:41 PM

Interloper~

Very nicely said...

lovely thoughts...

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

10 posted 2002-02-05 07:43 PM

INTERLOPER, I LOVE THIS.

floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

11 posted 2002-02-05 08:18 PM

...and to St. Peter he will tell." Nicely done. Bob

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

12 posted 2002-02-05 08:33 PM

Short but wise words...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

13 posted 2002-02-05 08:34 PM

...Very nicely penned Interloper....

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

14 posted 2002-02-05 08:34 PM

...and so you are!

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

15 posted 2002-02-05 08:48 PM

I like the way you do this, take a poem, and make a few lines that reflect it.
Lovely.
Sandra

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

16 posted 2002-02-06 07:02 PM

I love it.

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