I Call Her in My Dreams.............by request

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Auguste

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By the sea

0 posted 2002-02-05 04:20 PM

I Call Her in My Dreams

by Michael

I call her in my dreams at night
I whisper all the day
I've seen her in the twilight
As she strolls along the way

But it's not her, this captured gaze
So short would be her life
Just seagulls on an evening breeze
It is not her, my wife

In days now lost she clung to me
Until that day drew near
A breath of love we whispered free
I whisper still, my dear

I long to have her back with me
So I no longer mourn
And hold her through the dark, still night
Until the day is born

The house is as it was that day
With all her things in place
As though she will be coming back
And I will see her face

But deep within I know she's gone
To never be again
Soft melodies she used to hum
How I remember when

As sky becomes a dusty lace
And azure melts to gray
Soft starlight paints the scenery
As shadows show the way

She is not here this quiet night
Fate took revenge, it seems
She has now lost herself in light
And I am lost in dreams

serenity blaze
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1 posted 2002-02-05 04:24 PM

just gorgeous Michael! I can see why the request--for this I count among your many "best"!

*click of the library here*

Auguste

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By the sea

2 posted 2002-02-05 04:27 PM

Thank you, Karen. You're very sweet. *S*

Startime
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3 posted 2002-02-05 04:27 PM

*sigh* oh my gosh this poem touches the heart....I love it...beautiful and filled with feeling...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

SEA

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with you

4 posted 2002-02-05 04:30 PM

"She is not here this quiet night
Fate took revenge, it seems
She has now lost herself in light
And I am lost in dreams"

this makes for sighs upon sighs
saving this one my friend

[This message has been edited by SEA (02-05-2002 04:31 PM).]

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-02-05 04:33 PM

Michael, I don't know who requested this but I sure am glad they did. This has to be the best I have seen of yours thus far! Remarkable feelings here indeed.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

RosePetal

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6 posted 2002-02-05 05:01 PM

Yay, this is one of your best ever, I love it!

Joanna

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7 posted 2002-02-05 06:11 PM

(sigh) This is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your lovely words always touch the heart and make me smile, this is a true classic and I'm so glad someone requested it! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Saunni
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8 posted 2002-02-05 06:48 PM

So very awesome! Great write here! Love this

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

vandana

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9 posted 2002-02-05 06:51 PM

enjoyed

strbbux
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10 posted 2002-02-05 07:53 PM

"She is not here this quiet night
Fate took revenge, it seems
She has now lost herself in light
And I am lost in dreams "

Hmmmm no critiquing here auguste, wonderful write. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Martie

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11 posted 2002-02-05 08:04 PM

Michael

You have written such true emotion, and done it with just perfect words.

Greeneyes

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In Your Poetic Mind

12 posted 2002-02-05 10:43 PM

Lovely my friend...

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

Auguste

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By the sea

13 posted 2002-02-06 07:28 PM

Startime,
I'm happy I was able to touch your heart with this write.  Thank you *S*

Susan,
Love knowing I made you sigh *wink* and thank you for keeping it. *S*

Nancy,
The best?  Wow!  Thanks a LOT!  Now I'll have to do even better. LOL  Thank you and dearly.  *S* Hugs back

Joanna,
Thank you so much and I appreciate you coming by.  *S*

Noah,
It is always so nice to see you. *S*  Thank you much for your kindness.

Saunni,
Woohoo, I got an "awesome" *S*  Thank you,
so glad you liked it.

vandana,
Thank you very much. *S*

Floria,
I'm glad enjoyed it.  It's been critiqued in several workshops and this is the finished product. *S*  Thank you

Martie,
You're much too kind, but I thank you anyway, my friend. *S*

Lauren,
Thank you for reading and for the "lovely"...so good to see you here, my friend. *S*

Everyone, *S* is not quite as good as the real thing, huh?

Just know that each of you have brought me a smile and I thank you sincerely.

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Nan

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14 posted 2002-02-07 07:45 AM

Very lovely indeed... Ii particularly like the finale.. Well done, Sir Auguste..

Tiersdin
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east coast

15 posted 2002-02-07 07:56 AM

Beautiful... brings tears to the eyes...

~Tier

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