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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-02-05 03:45 PM


The Doctor is in and
Appointments are available.
Tell me of dreams,
desires,
hurts,
wants,
needs.
My medicine guarantees
a cure.
You
must believe in
yourself
as God does.
You
are God’s unique creation
born with a
plan,
a destiny,
a reason.
You
cannot hide
behind fear,
tears,
closed drapes.
You must walk
in Sunshine
in serenity
by the SEA
under the
Catalinamoon
with nakdthoughts
of Startime,
the Enchantress.
Your path
covered with
rose petals
under the
midnitesun
munching
peppermint35
with Larry C
and Lucie
on this
Auguste day
watching with
greeneyes
the Irish Rose
of ethome
pruned by
sven.
It is not a
quick cure,
but it is
immeasurably
enjoyable.



Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (02-05-2002 04:00 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-05 03:51 PM


You are a sweetheart! And this:

"It is not a
quick cure,
but it is
immeasurably
enjoyable."

Reminds me of a quote from The Beverly Hillbillies, from Granny, regarding her "rheumatiz medicine"--

"I've had rheumatiz for forty years and I loved every minute of it!"  (as she slaps her knee...) Thanks for the much needed smile today!



SEA
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with you
2 posted 2002-02-05 03:51 PM


yes, a walk by the SEA

love this, very well done LOVE DOCTOR

Startime
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Canada
3 posted 2002-02-05 03:52 PM


STANDING OVATION!!!!Leave it to you to create such a masterpiece as this poem. I LOVE IT!! I LOVE IT!!!BRAVO**big hugs** I know we will all love it...

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2002-02-05 03:58 PM


So glad to see the doctor in today...and in fine form at that!  What a wonderful prescription he offers up for all of us!
Loving this one....Nancy.

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

RosePetal
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5 posted 2002-02-05 05:03 PM


Ooohhhhhhhh...you are sooooooo sweet, don't forget some Mistletoe! This is so cute, I love it, you are such a sweetie!

Joanna

Victoria
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6 posted 2002-02-05 05:37 PM


i was going to make an appointment but i see you are all booked up ha

                     ~Victoria~

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

                                                -Ziggy

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By the sea
7 posted 2002-02-05 05:46 PM


Well, woohooooo to you. LOL!  I love it!  Thank for including me.  

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

Mistletoe Angel
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8 posted 2002-02-05 06:34 PM




WOW!!! Ooohhhhhhhh...doctor, you have cured me, this is a true prescription of a wonderful poem of love! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSSS) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are a delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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Listening to every heart
9 posted 2002-02-05 09:05 PM



Who knew? Something tells me...you've an Rx you've not yet made known...so write on, good poet, that we all be made well by your draught of smiles...

Madame Chipmunk
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Michigan
10 posted 2002-02-05 09:12 PM


This was so much fun to read, interloper...
I love this type of poem which is about all of my poet friends!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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The Shores of Alone
11 posted 2002-02-05 09:15 PM


This is fun, and I surely need the next available appointment, cause I am dying of SOMETHING, and no one can say what.
Nice to know there's a GOOD Doctor in the house.
Sandra

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In Your Poetic Mind
12 posted 2002-02-05 10:45 PM


OH wow see you cured me....

a keeper for me to read again, and again....


Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

Duncan
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13 posted 2002-02-05 10:50 PM


Think you could call me in a script?  Great, fun write, Dr. Love!
Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
14 posted 2002-02-05 11:35 PM


Interloper - well done, and well thought in placing poets in this write...

BC

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
15 posted 2002-02-06 05:38 PM


very sweet as always,
thank you for including me

M

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
16 posted 2002-02-06 09:02 PM


Hey Doc, just wanted to send you my job application /pip/Forum53/HTML/002760.html
Sandra

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State of Suspended Passion
17 posted 2002-02-06 09:36 PM


This is adorable, Sir.

I am many.

walker
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Florida
18 posted 2002-02-07 07:31 AM


Was I mentioned here? walk? Anyways I love it!
Lucie
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Houston
19 posted 2002-02-10 04:52 PM


Amazing you found a way to include me.. I thank you Sir.. smiles
strbbux
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20 posted 2002-02-10 06:52 PM


This is simply sweet as pie interloper, so so nice. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

BrightStar
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21 posted 2002-02-11 05:52 PM


Help me, too, Doctor

Admiring you at Passions.

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