Open Poetry #18 |
So I Write Silence on Deep Water |
quietwaters Junior Member
since 2002-02-04
Posts 30delray beach, florida |
so i write silence on deep water swirl my darkness with a finger into the amber depths of a teacup as if making a rite of it was itself a passage into final acceptance for absent friends i could have brought along with me to this moment. perhaps i would now be less alone certainly more forgiving, more tolerant of the cruel swaths that other people leave leaving so i write silence on deep water leaving a telltale like an instant realization soon gone... seems only fitting that i leave a track for others to forget me by... |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Welcome! This is an awesome poem. Great write here. I love your name, I have a poem called Quiet Waters. Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
quietwaters - welcome with this great write. I've not read yours before, but glad that I stopped by your place... BC |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Welcome to this wonderful place.. and what a wonderful poem you've written here.. I'd say you've left a track already Pepper |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
QuietWaters~ Lovely write~ Welcome to Passions circle of poets and friends~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Wonderful, atmospheric write with a feeling of deep contemplation, I enjoyed very much. Regards, Olias. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A very sad poem. It's not everyone that will take time to ripple the water, but once the ripple is made, they are never forgotten... looking forward to more! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Blew me away. I love everything about it. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Gosh I love this!! This is one incredible write! Enjoyed so much. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
WElcome to Passions sweetie, I know you're going to love it here, this is the best place by far! Love it! Joanna |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I can't pick a favorite line when I loved each one that much more....You write wonderfully. this is a keeper! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
QW~ In awe of this...WELCOME to Passions....I look forward to reading more... Greeneyes~ Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into the shadows of my heart [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-05-2002 07:46 PM).] |
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