Open Poetry #18 |
The Red Rage |
Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
During each month of of her adult years comes a week that brings a woman to tears she badly needs a sympathetic ear she doesn't feel sick, but she doesn't feel well she's tired and grouchy and just wants to yell during this week, she feels like hell it starts when we're teens we need to let off some steam and so, with our parents...we make a big scene no advice sounds sage during this wicked week of red rage when a woman's temper takes center stage but believe it or not, theres an end to this page though she does have to pay with advancing age one thing she will never miss is red rage |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lyra, I gotta say...no maybe not! This never described my wife. Okay, not this one anyway! There...I said it. All things considered...I should probably tell you what a lovely poem this is. |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
You did great here.You took something alot of women percieve as seriuos and turned into humorous.I'm never like that LOL Peaches |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
I like it!! Again.. you've written something both humerous and profound about this.. touchy subject.. lmao I can't remember.. or i plead the fifth!!! ::laughs:: Pepper |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Madame - your words say much, the color of this poem does also. I am sympathic to your plight... BC |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Absolutely identify!! So glad to be able to finally laugh about it!! Oh thankyou Madame, you've made my night!!! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so much, Larry...I'm glad that this never happens to your wife. It must be very nice for you. Of course, I never cause anyone any trouble either. Thanks for your reply copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so much, Peaches...Larry's wife isn't like that either...and neither am I...LOL! copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so much, Pepper You mean you really thought this was funny? LOL copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so much for your reply and your sympathy, Bill. copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Amusemi...thanks so much for your reply and I am glad to have made your night. copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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