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Behind The Moon
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Behind The Moon |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“BEHIND THE MOON” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Shadows appear from the light, darkness, is all I see tonight… An image, ghostly transparent, something, totally absent… Perhaps a heart lonely inside, seeking, places to hide… Wanting to know where you are, away, somewhere too far… I know about your charm, your beauty, I’m warm… Eyes soft, tender moist lips, hair flows gently, to your hips… In this dark night’s gentleness, if only one touch, a caress… I look, thought I was immune, even hiding, behind the moon… ~~~~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, your romantic words always make me smile, just as I know they will always melt your loves heart! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtakingly beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
love moonlight shadows bill...enjoyed very much ~Victoria~ You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Enjoyed! Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is good writing Bill...James |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Bill, Very well done. Peaches |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Yet another good one Bill Pepper |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Bill,this is so lovely and sweet.  Juanita |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill darling boy this is utterly utterly wonderful, the flow of this is fantastic, as smooth as cream, as smooth as the silken skin of a maiden who’s bathed in moonbeams. Truly outstandingly good writing, but you knew that darling boy didn’t you? Of course you do, you are indeed a writer. Do I love this YOU have to KNOW I do, absolutely first class   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Hiding behind the moon, oh such beautiful thoughts here Bill. floriaFloria |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love the feel of this one Bill. Nice relaxing read. Well done! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Ah, step out from behind the moon, you say; but how can I? For it's brightness has eclipsed even me... well done, Sir! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
But soft what light ...beautifully done. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Awwwwww, you're just so sweet, this is gorgeous, I love it! Joanna |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* looks like she has caught you in love's net...Well said...you can run from love but you can't hide behind the moon..the moon will always give your hiding place away  ...**big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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