Open Poetry #18 |
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Young Love |
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craigrk Member
since 2001-12-23
Posts 123![]() |
In younger days naiveté, your smiles by my side, my lies, fantasies - your name haunted me as though it were my own. By chance we spoke, danced through dreams - clowns in a medieval play - mocking the phantoms surreal, landing delicately, unscathed, from psychedelic shadows whispering halloween. To touch your lips, your hands, fiendish acts of hollow men - all that I saw was your smile as it smuggled the glow, steeled the space between your eyes and mine. Finally I come to know her as I come to know myself, I beg all men to find her, make their love complete. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
You are a very handsome fellow and I enjoyed this read very much. Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Siofra![]()
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
*giggles* It seems around here the vote is that you are handsome, and I'll agree with that. Your writing is also most handsome, Sir. There is so much here that I can't begin to describe it, but I got something wonderful out of it. I am many. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write! Goodness but you are a handsome man!! Oops um, excuse me... ![]() ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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craigrk Member
since 2001-12-23
Posts 123 |
Thanks for all your comments and kind words. |
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