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Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

0 posted 2002-02-04 07:31 PM

The Flavor Of His Kiss

It starts with a yearning desire
to feel his warm embrace
Flows through her like a burning fire
giving a blush to face

She can almost taste passion’s lips
when breathing manly scent
While trying hard to come to grips
her heart gives it’s consent

As her body starts to tremble
she sees his face descend
All her senses now assemble
for what his lips intend

At first a gentle, sweet caress
whispers across her cheek
Breathing a sigh she can’t repress
she melts while legs go weak

Breathing as one without a pause
they feed upon love’s bliss
Aflame, she now knows the cause,
the flavor of his kiss

Karen Torbiak 2002©

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

[This message has been edited by Startime (02-04-2002 07:33 PM).]

brianbeaudry
Member

since 2001-07-20

Posts 410
Northern Ontario Canada

1 posted 2002-02-04 07:39 PM

WOW!!!!!...gotta catch my breath here Karen.....Powerful...sensual...intoxicating...

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

2 posted 2002-02-04 08:07 PM

Karen, you write with wonderfully romantic, sensual power. You are dynamite!!

((Karen))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

3 posted 2002-02-04 08:15 PM

Karen...this is so beautiful. It reminds me of the first time my husband and I kissed. It sort of took me by surprise...especially the feelings that it gave me. At the time, I had been widowed for a little over a year, and for a year and a half previous to that, I had been a caregiver for my first husband while he was very sick. I had been married for 34 yrs...so I had forgotten what brand new love feels like.......Now I know, its delicious...and that was almost 2 yrs ago and its still delicious!
Thanks for sharing.

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

J. K. Mitchell
Member

since 2002-01-12

Posts 311
GA

4 posted 2002-02-04 08:18 PM

That was VERY good. I could feel the passion from your lines.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-02-04 08:19 PM

Wonderful Karen! Mmmm I love kisses too!
This is so romantic! Enjoyed this one tonight.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

6 posted 2002-02-04 08:26 PM

Brian...You are just too cute, my friend. Thank you....I am so glad you liked it. **big hugs**

Newell....and a very big cyber kiss for you too...

MC...I am so glad you discovered a new love who would share such passionate kisses with you...You are deserving of the very best...I know you are the type who will always be set aflame by his kiss. It has been over 3 years since I tasted a kiss...but I still remember how it curled my toes...**big hugs**

J.K....I am glad you could feel the passion...I sure felt it when I was writing this. **big hugs**

Nancy...*giggling* some how I knew kisses would excite you...I am so glad you like the poem...**big hugs**

keep kissing him..and I am sure you will set him aflame every time you do.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

[This message has been edited by Startime (02-04-2002 08:28 PM).]

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

7 posted 2002-02-04 08:49 PM

mmmmm....love those kisses

love it karen dear..hugss nicely done

~Vic

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

-Ziggy

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2002-02-04 09:14 PM

OH YESSSSS>....Shoot...IF I were a single man
I would be right there....but...guess I will
just have to give LouLou an extra big one
tonite.... I love this poem...

YEP YEP

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

9 posted 2002-02-04 09:14 PM

sigh.............Karen, you are queen of romance.

Kathleen--(Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

10 posted 2002-02-05 02:38 AM

Karen - you do write romance very well. I enjoy reading yours, as they always have something in them to say...

BC

N orth Carolina Girl
Senior Member

since 2001-12-04

Posts 962
NC,USA

11 posted 2002-02-05 06:10 AM

Karen,wonderfully romantic and hot!

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

12 posted 2002-02-05 07:43 AM

Now THIS kiss I prefer to chocolate.
Karen, 3 years is too long. Same here,except for 2 notable exceptions of a few days a year. What shall we do?
We should email and come up with a plan.
Sandra

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