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Scots Gent
Junior Member

since 2002-01-20

Posts 17
In a Lover's Heart

0 posted 2002-02-04 05:56 PM

Seven wonderful days
That seemed too good to be true
Just to be in your presence
The days were all too few
I was born on Monday
By Friday I had lived and died
When we decided to end it
I knew that we both tried
But too many problems too soon
Can bring down the greatest of love
Although we are still trying
We’ll need the grace of the one above
Only time will tell if we can have it all
Spend eternity in each other’s eyes
The test will be worth it in the end
Cause love is stronger than we realize

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-02-04 06:01 PM

BRAVO!!! BRAVO!!!! Oh my gosh, I hope your love does grow and you and her will share a lifetime of happiness together, this is such a fabulous debut!!! I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Scots, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspored by your lovely words! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Scots, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-04-2002 06:01 PM).]

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

2 posted 2002-02-04 06:02 PM

Oh BRAVO!!!This is beautiful...yes love is stronger than we realise...Welcome to Passions...This is a fine poem to use to introduce yourself...I hope it all works out for both of you. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Scots Gent
Junior Member

since 2002-01-20

Posts 17
In a Lover's Heart

3 posted 2002-02-04 06:03 PM

Thank you for the welcome MA...might kick the shoes off and stay a while

SG

Life is too short, supersize it - SG

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

4 posted 2002-02-04 06:38 PM

speaking volumes to me right now...

enjoyed the read..

please do--shed the kicks and stay a while

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"and i'd give up forever to touch you..cause i know you can feel me somehow..." -googoo dolls

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

5 posted 2002-02-04 06:41 PM

Welcome, I enjoyed reading your poem very much. Hope to read more.

Kathleen--(Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

6 posted 2002-02-04 06:41 PM

Hello Scot

Such a wonderful picture of love and longing you have painted here from your magical palette of words - I loved it and can't wait to read more from you. Welcome to Passions and I hope you will stay with us for some time.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

7 posted 2002-02-04 06:43 PM

Welcome to our humble home. I really enjoyed your poem and hope to read more from you. Please check your email for a special PiP greeting!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2002-02-04 07:05 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!

Wonderful First Post!
Relax and take a look around...enjoy yourself.
I look foward to seeing more of your work.
~Hugs, Nancy lee~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

9 posted 2002-02-04 07:17 PM

Excellent first post...look forward to more.
Welcome to a warm place...Passions...

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

10 posted 2002-02-04 07:21 PM

Welcome to Passions! An excellent way to start! Now I agree, kick back and enjoy, for you will find none quite like us...

I promise!

Fee
Member

since 2000-08-07

Posts 381
Melbourne, Australia

11 posted 2002-02-04 07:33 PM

Nicely written, welcome to a new world.

Hugs, Fee

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

12 posted 2002-02-04 07:49 PM

Beautiful piece, I hope it works out!! Welcome to Passions!!!

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

13 posted 2002-02-04 08:24 PM

I was born on Monday
By Friday I had lived and died
==================================

that say so much so deeply....
this is a cadenced kissed write of longing.
Welcome to Poetry Land SC, so nice to have you here with us.

take care
jm

You speak to me in riddles and you speak to me in rhymes.
My body aches to breathe your breath ... your words keep me alive.

~Sarah McLachlan~

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