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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-02-04 01:59 PM


pray come fly with me
for our souls are gemini
we shall ever be
eternity beckons us
as we turn our hearts thereto
Inspired by :Touch Me inspired by Lady In White’s “When People Touch”)


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (02-04-2002 02:08 PM).]

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with you
1 posted 2002-02-04 02:01 PM


ah, you do this so beautifully
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SEA ~
You make my heart sing

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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with you
3 posted 2002-02-04 02:11 PM


and you mine

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4 posted 2002-02-04 02:25 PM


Let's all sing! What key?
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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5 posted 2002-02-04 02:33 PM


From one Texan to another.. ya'll sure do know how to make beautiful music

I'll hum along with you-all

Hugz,

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
   Percy Bysshe Shelley

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6 posted 2002-02-04 02:36 PM


Silver Streak ~
I sing in all keys ... at once

Peppermint35 ~
Ok, we have a quartet (and 2 ov 'em Texicans)!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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7 posted 2002-02-04 02:37 PM


Adding to the sing along...
I like these thoughts. Almost made me smile on a blue day.
Sandra

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8 posted 2002-02-04 02:41 PM




(smiles) Ooohhhhhh...this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your words always make me smile and delight my day! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is 1derful! (BIG HUGGSSSSSS) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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Sandra ~
Almost?  ALMOST?!?  Well, what do I have to do?  Lemme ponder this predicament a bit.

Noah ~
Thank you my fine young friend


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (02-04-2002 02:56 PM).]

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10 posted 2002-02-04 08:08 PM


*sigh* this really brought a smile to my face...I love it and the fact that I am gemini cusp...but still haven't figured out how you know...**big hugs** I am glad I inspired your talented words...

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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11 posted 2002-02-04 08:50 PM


I've always loved your talent for this kind of writing. enjoyed.

I am many.

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12 posted 2002-02-04 10:46 PM



"our souls are gemini"
what a clever phrase!

sighs* I love this!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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13 posted 2002-02-04 11:23 PM


You are such a doll, how lovely this is! Love it!

Joanna

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Startime ~
It seems you inspire a lot of my work lately

Siofra ~
Thank you VERY much

Melissa H ~
I'm glad you noticed

Rose Petal ~
{blush} So, you think I am an empty headed plaything...

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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15 posted 2002-02-05 01:56 PM



Gemini, watching
Archer takes the rein of time
Circles them both well
Strikes them both firm by arrow
Straight through two hearts to one love

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16 posted 2002-02-05 02:02 PM


I love this!  You do these so well Interloper.  But I just happen to love the word, 'Eternity.'  Very nicely done.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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17 posted 2002-02-05 04:26 PM


Soliel Noir ~
Wonderfully writ   I love those kind of replies.

Enchantress ~
It has a nice ring to it, doesn't it

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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