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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-02-04 12:22 PM


it's just an excuse
I don't need winter to snuggle
you're reason enough

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2002 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
Duncan
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1 posted 2002-02-04 12:31 PM


I remember the reason well.  Today, the winter just seems colder.
Tiersdin
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2 posted 2002-02-04 12:43 PM


Enjoyed this greatly...

*smiles*

~Tier

amigo
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3 posted 2002-02-04 12:58 PM


I like this, Interloper, and hope you're with your 'warm blankie'...

Martie
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4 posted 2002-02-04 01:08 PM


Awwww...I know what you mean.  Loved the thought!
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2002-02-04 01:14 PM


Ahhh, see I told you that you don't need a reason or an excuse!  Good one Interloper!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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6 posted 2002-02-04 01:28 PM


Duncan ~
I remember, too ... when I have those rare moments of lucidity

Tiersdin ~
Long time no see.  Glad to have you visit these pages again.

Amigo ~
I think your first visit to my work.  welcome, and thanks for the comment

Martie ~
Thank you for reading my work.  It's been a long time.

Enchantress ~
You sure did, Nancy, and I believed you, too!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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7 posted 2002-02-04 01:34 PM


So true. If the "you" is available, that is.So when exactly did you think it would be in my hands??
Sandra

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with you
8 posted 2002-02-04 01:37 PM



I have no excuse
I reach for you in snuggles
wanting body heat

Sunshine
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9 posted 2002-02-04 01:49 PM



Winter's long napping
bearing barely enough light
stoking memories

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10 posted 2002-02-04 01:56 PM


Sandra ~
Ask and you shall receive

SEA ~
body heat for two
essense of synergism
among other things

Sunshine ~
like burning embers
memories of love glowing
stoked by thought and touch

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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11 posted 2002-02-04 02:39 PM


Interloper,
How come I didn't write that? Wow...I love it.

peppermint35
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12 posted 2002-02-04 02:41 PM


Hope u don't mind that I shared this warmth.. through reading, of course

Enjoyed!!!

Hugz,

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
   Percy Bysshe Shelley

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13 posted 2002-02-04 02:42 PM


Larry ~
Shhhhhhhhhhhhhh.  You did and I plagiarized


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (02-04-2002 02:57 PM).]

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14 posted 2002-02-04 02:44 PM


It makes no difference
What season we both share
Our love is true



(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it!!! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) Again your smiles are contagious behind your words, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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15 posted 2002-02-04 02:58 PM


Noah ~
I love it when readers answer in verse.  Thank you my friend.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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16 posted 2002-02-04 06:17 PM


*sigh* such a romantic you are...I love the idea and feel of this poem. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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