Open Poetry #18 |
Captain Candy King |
Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Captain Candy King One, two, three, four See those ants crawl on the floor Going slow just to and fro To and from Mom's sugar bowl. A, B, C and D; E and F and also G Grandpa come and read to me Stories about what you did see When you sailed the seven seas Tell me all the things you'd do. And when a big tiger got loose at the zoo How you chased and raced him too But with a great big bowl of milk He came right back to you. Tell me when you climbed that mountain To find that tasty candy fountain And is it true that the Candy Queen? Just made you Captain Candy King? Copyright: Newell Elsworth Usher Silver Springs, Florida August 14, 2000 |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
such a wonderful flowing write this one... makes me feel glad to have read it... regards, sudhir |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, sudhir, for you kind thoughts. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* I love the sweetness of this poem...BRAVO!!!**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Very sweet and sugary, my grandson would love this, floria Floria |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Newell,I love these kind of poems.WONDERFUL! Juanita |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Mmmmmmmmm...Candy Land Revisited, I love it!!! (smiles) Your words are always so sweet and pure, sweet friend, you are a delight to us all, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Newell, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, Karen for your candy sweet thoughts. ((Karen)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, floria. I am glad you like it. Send an E-card to her if you like. ((floria)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, Juanita. I love anything sweet that makes children smile, especially little girls. ((Juanita)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, Noah. Your words are always sweet like candy. ((Noah)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Heres to the candy king and to all the joy he brings with the wonderful verses that he writes his name ought to be in lights wearing his kingly crown while writing his poetry of renown copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Why thank you, Madame. Your picture of me is remarkably accurate, and your poem is simply divine. I am deeply honored and humbled. Have another candy kiss, xo and another xo... You are terrific! ((Madame Chipmunk)) Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (02-04-2002 08:40 PM).] |
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