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amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

0 posted 2002-02-04 01:48 AM

I do believe this sacred prose
Is just a litany
Of hope and dreams
And so it seems
A chaste monotony
But in the realm of muse's grace
I spy a reverie
Of times long gone
Hurts left behind
To restore my autonomy
Believe in time, a supple space
I see a sense of glee
And now I am myself, I deem
Just a poet named Amusemi...

Love,
Kat

Just believe...

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2002-02-04 01:52 AM

Kat,
Can't beat that! Cool. I really liked this. Nice write.

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

2 posted 2002-02-04 02:05 AM

those were the days my friend
we thought they'd never end
we'd sing and dance...

nice write

appreciate your feedback on those social issues I have been posting!

[This message has been edited by ecrivan (02-04-2002 02:06 AM).]

peppermint35
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1106
Texas, USA

3 posted 2002-02-04 03:04 AM

Just want to say that you also did.. amuse me

Good write, thanks for sharing this.

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2002-02-04 06:16 AM

Cool write Kat. Enjoyed.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2002-02-04 07:56 AM

I do believe this sacred prose
Is just a litany
Of hope and dreams
And so it seems
A chaste monotony
But in the realm of muse's grace
I spy a reverie
Of times long gone
Hurts left behind
To restore my autonomy
===================================

this is clever and cute...
I love your rhyme scheme and the vocabulary, as well as the word play on your pen name.
a wonderful musing from your muse

You speak to me in riddles and you speak to me in rhymes.
My body aches to breathe your breath ... your words keep me alive.

~Sarah McLachlan~

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

6 posted 2002-02-04 12:36 PM

love the way this felt reading aloud, very flowing write.

Kathleen--(Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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