Open Poetry #18 |
Asylum Lake |
Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Let me show you Asylum Lake a beautiful gem worn in secret, by a bustling city hidden amongst her layers of housing developments and shopping centers a sylvan enclave of peace and serenity surrounded by busy roads and highways Asylum Lake asylum for the birds and the owl that screeches asylum for all of Gods furry creatures for turtles and frogs for critters who live on it's lilypads and in it's bogs Asylum Lake graceful and glistening in the sun mysterious in a midsummer fog asylum for troubled souls and creative spirits, alike asylum for birdwatchers and walkers who hike for new lovers alone to share a sweet kiss Asylum Lake haven of delight and rapturous bliss |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
I'd take a couple of weeks off and go to refuge like that to write someday!!Relaxed thoughts this generates. Please read my posting a spin off on the jail pen pals |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
This is so peaceful, both the scene and the words you've penned so skillfully.. and I am in much need of serenity.. imagining myself there right now Thank you Lyra.. a truly inspirational poem. Pepper |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I too would love to go up there sometime and see all the birds and trees! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, it is always a delight when you take us to places with your words! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lyra, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh yes....this is stunning...what a magnificent picture and poem...together they flow into a feeling of such serenity...I love it. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Lyra,it sounds like a beautiful place.TAKE CARE! Juanita |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
peaceful and serene.... INDEED!!!! regards, sudhir |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
A wonderful place to write poetry. Thank you, Madame for sharing with us. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
a sylvan enclave of peace and serenity ====================================== how cool is that line...love the vocab!! wonderful poem of imagery. Well done Poetess Madame You speak to me in riddles and you speak to me in rhymes. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
it's a wonderful scene and words to go with it, looks like a place I could use right now... Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sounds like a nice place |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lyra...we have places and spaces like that here too...just hiding in the middle of a city..my back yard is one of them. I'd love to see your lake...sounds wonderful! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks Martin, Its a beautiful place, but you wouldn't be able to stay there for a couple of weeks at a time because there are no facilities......unless of course, you camped out at my house, which is just down the street....or, you could stay in a hotel and go there during the day. copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so much for your reply, Pepper... It was the beauty of the real Asylum Lake which inspired me to write the poem. copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so much, Noah. The place is a very beautiful paradise, but is always under threat from developers who want to build retail centers, offices or even factories on it. I am very involved in a citywide effort to save it. copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so much, Karen...Asylum Lake is indeed a beautiful and inspiring place...its hard to believe that if not for the efforts of some of our citizens, we might have a research park sitting on it right now. I am also proud to say that I was and still am one of those citizens. Of course the business community calls us anti business tree huggers and says that we are ruining the city's economy...and the local newspaper heartily agrees! copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks Juanita..it truly is an awesomely beautiful spot. Thats where David and I shared our very first kiss! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so much for your reply Sudhir... I don't think that the poem even does justice to the beauty of Asylum Lake. copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks Newell...I tried to share the beauty of Asylum Lake with everyone through my words, but I don't think words really exist, which describe its real beauty. copyright2002 Lyra Nesius "poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks [This message has been edited by Madame Chipmunk (02-04-2002 10:09 PM).] |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
If you were at Asylum Lake today, Kay...you would be greeted by this gentleman Thanks for your reply copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so much, JM...I am very flattered that you like the poem. copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
It is an absolutely awesome place, Interloper. There are lots of oak trees and acorns.....and, I spend lots of time there except in the winter, when I hibernate in my burrow beneath the ground. Thanks for your reply copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so much, Martie...Isn't it wonderful how a nature sanctuary can actually exist in the middle of a city. Asylum Lake has been under threat from developers for years...and thank goodness, we have been able to stop them...but the threat continues and we have to keep going to City Hall and convincing the people who run the city that greenspace and open space are more valuable than shopping centers, office parks or research parks. I have been involved with this protest stuff now for about 12 years....but it is worth every minute of the time I have spent doing it...to keep this lovely place preserved. copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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