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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2002-02-03 09:24 PM


Come here and taste, I say you can
whatever rumors you've been told
just silky smooth and oh so sweet
a bit of warmth in world of cold.

So let your mouth feel all the joy
you know you want to, I can see
Don't worry so of dire results
some things are simply meant to be.

Come here now and slowly unwrap
the treasure you hold in your hand
I promise you'll be glad you did
and everyone will understand.

It's just a litte kiss for you
your lips can handle it just fine
so peel the silver wrapper off
A chocolate kiss is so divine.

© Copyright 2002 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-03 09:30 PM




(smiles) Mmmmmmmm, there's nothing like a kiss indeed, this is sooooooooo lovely! (kiss on cheek) Your beautiful words are always so inspiring, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Tiersdin
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2 posted 2002-02-03 09:30 PM


*chuckles*

Loved this!

~Tier

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3 posted 2002-02-03 09:32 PM


Very clever - I like this!

Carol

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4 posted 2002-02-03 09:33 PM


Ah Sandra!  You had me going right up until the end!  
Cute write...and kinda sexy too!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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5 posted 2002-02-03 09:37 PM


This is absolutely precious, Sandra!

Sometimes chocolate kisses are the best kind.

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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6 posted 2002-02-03 09:40 PM


nothing like a chocolate kiss haa...i love them cute one sandra..

              ~Vic

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7 posted 2002-02-03 10:09 PM


Awwwwwww, mmm, I'd love some chocolate right about now, can I have some! Love it!!!

Joanna

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8 posted 2002-02-03 11:13 PM


sandra...the candy is dandy...but your turn is on the way...helen
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9 posted 2002-02-03 11:18 PM


*giggling* at work the girls always tell me that chocolate is better then an orgasm...but you know what I think...I think they are missing out on something really great....but I do love milk chocolate..I just know which I would choose given the chance....no contest... **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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10 posted 2002-02-03 11:25 PM


Hey, I’m with you…if you can’t get the real thing…the chocolate one does make for a pretty decent second best. Cute Sandra, very cute. I needed the chuckle today. I don't have any Hershey's kisses, but I do have a jar of Nutella in the cupboard...think I'm going to get it out, and just eat it with a spoon

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

[This message has been edited by Tracey (02-03-2002 11:27 PM).]

peppermint35
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11 posted 2002-02-04 03:21 AM


You had me going Sandra.. and I really enjoyed the end... chocolate may indeed be the best.. or at least... a close second ::laughs::

Good one, Sandra.. I enjoyed it

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
   Percy Bysshe Shelley

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12 posted 2002-02-04 03:23 AM


My favorites...chocolate kisses...James
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13 posted 2002-02-04 08:54 AM


Not to mention the "other" kind which can be just as delicious and habit forming
I loved it!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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14 posted 2002-02-04 10:32 AM




regards,
sudhir

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15 posted 2002-02-04 10:40 AM


"some things are simply meant to be."...Gotta love that chocolate! Cute poem! *s

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16 posted 2002-02-04 10:50 AM


Devine indeed ... darling write lady!
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17 posted 2002-02-04 09:34 PM


catalinamoon - H'mmmm, didn't know what to say except "I'm puckered and ready"....

BC

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18 posted 2002-02-04 10:41 PM


This is soooo cute, Sandra.  Just loved it.  It made me smile.

Michael

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There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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