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A Drop in the Glass
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A Drop in the Glass |
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RottenApples New Member
since 2002-01-31
Posts 9 |
"A Drop in the Glass" ---------- The lonliness is treasure The lonliness is bliss Like a bead of rolling water I am eager for your kiss Reach into your soul And feel a heart thats made of gold Like a bead of rollings water In the bottom of the glass My heart is being slaughtered By my deathlike lonliness You have no clue What you do to me You have no clue What you do to me And I look for a sunny day For the pain to take away You can end it all like nothing You can end it without delay Like a bead of rolling water Ready to make a splash My heart is empty and burning Like a heap of dusty ash You have no clue What you do to me You have no clue What you do to me Then sadness is over The pain is overcome Like a bead of rolling water Only meaningful to some Only you can end the hurt And you did so without effort Like a bead of rolling water My love falls no longer short You have no clue What you do to me You have no clue What you do to me YOU HAVE NO CLUE WHAT SHE DID TO ME [This message has been edited by RottenApples (02-03-2002 11:18 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssssss) Soooooooo beautifully bittersweet, sweet friend, such loneliness and pain fills your words but yet speaks of the hope and faith love can replace it with! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are a delight to us all, may true love and joy always fill your heart! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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RottenApples New Member
since 2002-01-31
Posts 9 |
Thank you. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I move through your poetry with ease feeling the flow of the music as I read...Very well done. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Wow, sounds like she certainly got your emotions fired up there. Great, and powerful write you have composed. I think I’m going back to this for a second read…maybe even a third. Oh what the heck, into my library...this is good If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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RottenApples New Member
since 2002-01-31
Posts 9 |
Thank you all so much for the positive comments. I'm very pleased to hear you like it. I've only written this with two other pieces.. all of which are posted here. It's nice to hear that people aren't totally dissatisfied with my work in its amateur state. |
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