Open Poetry #18 |
This Is A Warning |
DayDreamer99 Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 72 |
Drowning Slowly.. Anger Overtakes Me Everyone Is Making Me Mad Back Off This Is A Warning Dont Get To Close I Might Accidently Push You Away I Will Cry Silent Tears Back Off This Is A Warning I Thought Maybe By Letting You Go First Id Be Saving Myself Pain.. Little Did I Know It Was Pain I Did Gain Please...Ignore My Warning By:Tiffany |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
just getting to sign off the the evening, and read this, such a sad write, sometimes we do feel this way about things and just want to be a hermit, oh if sometimes we could! Kathleen--(Kay) |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
I like this! Good write! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Tiffany, this is so ver sad, my heart goes out to you! I a always here for you if you need someone to talk to, you are surrounded by many who love you always! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSSS) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tiffany, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Yes, I know these mixed up emotions….”go away… but don’t leave me”. Felt them myself. Confusion reigns supreme sometimes. I really like the way you wrote this one. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!!Powerful emotions that are filled with confusion.....You have written it perfectly. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
I read in this the mixed messages that confusing emotions bring. I really like this lots. It's a keeper!! |
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