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DayDreamer99
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since 2002-01-23
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0 posted 2002-02-03 08:20 PM



Drowning
Slowly..
Anger Overtakes Me
Everyone Is Making Me Mad
Back Off

This Is A Warning

Dont Get To Close
I Might Accidently
Push You Away
I Will Cry Silent Tears
Back Off

This Is A Warning

I Thought
Maybe By
Letting You Go First
Id Be Saving Myself
Pain..
Little Did I Know
It Was Pain I Did Gain

Please...Ignore My Warning

                                    By:Tiffany


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Irish Rose
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1 posted 2002-02-03 08:23 PM


just getting to sign off the the evening, and read this, such a sad write, sometimes we do feel this way about things and just want to be a hermit, oh if sometimes we could!

Kathleen--(Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee



J. K. Mitchell
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2 posted 2002-02-03 08:55 PM


I like this!

Good write!

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3 posted 2002-02-03 10:03 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Tiffany, this is so ver sad, my heart goes out to you! I a always here for you if you need someone to talk to, you are surrounded by many who love you always! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSSS) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tiffany, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding
4 posted 2002-02-03 10:34 PM


Yes, I know these mixed up emotions….”go away… but don’t leave me”. Felt them myself. Confusion reigns supreme sometimes. I really like the way you wrote this one.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
5 posted 2002-02-03 10:50 PM


WOW!!!Powerful emotions that are filled with confusion.....You have written it perfectly. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

amusemi
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since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262
A State of Disarray
6 posted 2002-02-04 01:26 AM


I read in this the mixed messages that confusing emotions bring.  I really like this lots.  It's a keeper!!
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