Red Salmon Sunset (Duet With Victoria)

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Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-02-03 05:36 PM

Let us toast, to the red salmon sunset
with romantic goblets of sweet summer rain
drowning within the dizziness of love
instead of effervescent champagne

This toast to beauty, this toast to a gem
shall be drunk freely as soft pearls fall.
As dervishes in a whirr, this love takes them
into the waiting light of a soft moon's call.

Come dance within a combo of raindrops
two silhouettes in the heartbeats of night
beneath a piazza of glowing stars
upon a veranda of silk moonlight

Feathered feet shall shuffle into the light
as the dawn takes from us the waning moon.
And stars shall wink a cheerful goodnight
as love dances and two hearts once swoon.

Victoria gave me the 1st and 3rd...I
humbly added 2 and 4...Some day I will
know how to make the colors different.

Thanx Vic for the collaboration...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2002-02-03 05:56 PM

Incredibly beautiful you two!
Victoria and Barry you du-et sooo well together!
~Love it, and hugs to you both, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

2 posted 2002-02-03 06:34 PM

what a GREAT collaboration.....

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2002-02-03 06:35 PM

'Tis a wonderful collaboration...

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

4 posted 2002-02-03 06:38 PM

You two make a great pair....
Terrific job on this one!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

5 posted 2002-02-03 08:34 PM

Thank you Barry..i enjoyed writing with you
You are a beautiful writer
Anytime is good for me...and thanks guys and gals for your sweet comments HUGS

~Victoria~

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

-Ziggy

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

6 posted 2002-02-03 09:12 PM

Wow, you two make a beautiful combination.
Sandra

J. K. Mitchell
Member

since 2002-01-12

Posts 311
GA

7 posted 2002-02-03 09:25 PM

Delightful and Sweet combination

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-02-03 09:54 PM

YAY!!! WOW, this is sooooooooo beautifully breathtaking, you two make such a fabulous duet, this is fantastic!!! (smiles) Such beautiful imagery and emotion both make this gorgeous poem, we all love you both so much!!! Kudos to you two!!! (BIG HUGGGSSSSSS) You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Barry and Victoria, thank you for sharing!