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Styrofoam Domini
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Styrofoam Domini |
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craigrk Member
since 2001-12-23
Posts 123
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Upper middle metamorphous, dangling mortal pride in landscaped rural purgatory - duped escape from the roach and worm. Remote retreat, aluminum-sided suburb - desperatehellos across gated bridges over rodent-crested seas. Aloof, comfortable, button-down exile, waving back remorse at melodrama’s homeless - daring never pay surrealistic tolls. Dynamically lazy, dull of mind, yet still inherently proud in Kierkegaard concrete cashmere – dirty, guarded martinis at charity’s open-guilt bar. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
This poem brings to mind the homeless in a city that is filled with all the glitter of life without direction...You spin words in a very different manner that captures the mind and asks it to see more than words but a vision of the sadness of this life you show here. Stunning. I really liked reading this poem. It opened my eyes to sadness and loss..**big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. [This message has been edited by Startime (02-03-2002 12:57 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) Sooooooo sad but well-written, sweet friend, my heart goes out to all these people who cope with homeless lifestyles and I pray with all my heart that we can reach out to them all and offer them love and guidance to care for them all! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, these words speak with tears from your compassionate heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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