Open Poetry #18 |
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Sacrifice Of Me |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Sacrifice Of Me By: Noah Eaton 2/1/02 My dear Lord, I've lost my wings I can't find a song to sing It's so cold out here This child I held deep inside of me The star of many memories Where did you run out there? It's been too few years I've lived in vain I have nothing I feel ashamed In all this time Part of me has died I try to understand these tears I cry All that I've left behind... All the times I've missed the ice cream truck All the moments the sun never came up I was never cared In all this timke I've been abused All these prayers I could never use Streams of tears flowing out there It's been too few years I've lived in vain I have nothing I feel ashamed In all this time Part of me has died I try to understand these tears I cry All that I've left behind... All I ever wanted was to feel free... All I want is to feel free... It's been too few years I've lived in vain I have nothing I feel ashamed In all this time Part of me has died I try to understand these tears I cry All that I've left behind... All I was has crumbled at my feet I just want to find a melody To compensate For this sacrifice of me... [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-02-2002 12:48 AM).] |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Noah, Oh the rollercoaster of life. It does get better...but you know that! Hang in there. ![]() |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you Noah, for reminding us that even when life has roses that there are thorns. Looking back never solves anything. We need to just use our learning and keep our eyes on the future. Thank you for sharing. ![]() -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
The ups and downs of life told so truly.Very nice! |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
*BIG WARM HUGS* love you, ~Tier |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Dear Noah, This is a good song-kinda depressing, but a lot of the good ones are. I like it. ![]() ![]() Nan |
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Rodney Belcher Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 227Taylor, Michigan |
So sad MA...use to you being upbeat...lol...Rod Nothing ever happens unless first a Dream - Rod |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Made me think of that upbeat Christain song. He set me free yes he set me free. He broke the bonds of prison for me. I'm glory bound my Jesus to see. Glory be to God for he set me free. And he will...no matter what we endure...the freedom is there when we are ready to take hold of it...James |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Noah, I have felt this way many times over the years. But I PROMISE, you have a brilliant future ahead. And you are free, already, because you can say how you feel. Sandra |
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RosePetal![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Hi baby, Til this day I sitll go through little depression spells every now and then. I know how it feels, but we all have so much to live for! Without you, I would never have this much inspiration!!! (hugs) RP |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Noah dear, God loves you so so much. He shows you every day how much in the beautiful words He puts in your soul to write. and then He shows you when you post and share with us those words. And all your wonderful replies. You are a gem. A diamond. Don't ever forget that. ![]() Floria |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* just look to the future, dear Noah...the day will come when you will understand the past but to keep going there will only keep you depressed...move ahead in life and let it embrace you...**big hugs** ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Hang in there buddy!! It's true, the things that don't kill us make us stronger!! I shouldn't be replying today...that mood thing you know! Really though, you are one of the favorites and we couldn't do without you!! ![]() |
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