Open Poetry #18 |
Flightless Bird |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Flightless Bird strangers now surround you and hang on every word you alone made a choice picking what you preferred now you call saying to me without my love you can not live its not your love it’s the way you love that I can not forgive then comes the promises the same ones of change ones I wanted to believe in but they are out of range I know all about change it can be a flightless bird and never takes off if nothing has occurred you had a chance to love me but giving love to me was denied you broke my heart now I just bruise your pride "I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow) |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) So very painfully said, sweet friend, promises should never be made if they cannot be kept! (kiss on cheek) I hope now your heart has found the most beautiful love and soars like a dove now! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Helen - sometimes the flightless birds don't know how well they had it, until they've lost it... BC |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Pride should never get in the way of love...I hope you work things out..this poem is filled with pain. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
To fly a bird must heal or grow new wings. Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
I would not want to be on the receiving end of this. What a powerful write!! Good job! |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Awwww, this is so sad, you deserve great happiness always, you deserve love always. I'm with you always! Joanna |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
To whom this is written ... Ouch!!! LOL I sent my E-Mail address... Did you receive it? |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Helen, Very powerful. Never easy but sometimes necessary. Excellent write. Thanks. |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Helen, from my point of view.. this is not only powerful.. but it says something that really needs to be said.. Tidy Pepper |
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