Open Poetry #18 |
Be Still (a repost) |
peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Confusion and pain in equal parts Darkly appealing, chaotic thoughts No answers come to mind How long must this last Can it be wrong to seek an end Or must one linger on Caught in this living hell What karmic wrongs must be repaid To make this torture last so long Hope lives eternal they sometimes say But even hope can die away In the greyness of that day When finally nothing's left to say Be still Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley [This message has been edited by peppermint35 (02-03-2002 02:55 AM).] |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Yes, it is this way. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is full of despair. Be calm...spring is coming Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(tears fall down my cheeks) Such tears fill these words, sweet friend, my heart goes to you and I pray with all my heart that hope will come to you and spring will blossom in your heart and always fill you with comfort! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet freind, my heart goes out to you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lavenia, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
It's like your stuck at a point in your life and you certainly can't go backwards but you can't go forward either. This is good. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
enjoyed reading this... *smiles* ~tier |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Thank you amusemi, JK and Tiersdin, for your kind comments.. I'm working through it.. this is part of my therapy... Thanks Kathleen.. I will try hard to remember that.. Thank you too Noah.. I'm trying to find that hope.. seems temporarily misplaced.. Pepper |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Obviously you have a lot to say and we enjoy the reading I look forward to the turning toward happines for you Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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