Open Poetry #18 |
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My Mom |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
My Mom The day is rich with thoughts that fall in rain My mind is full of her, my mom, my pride The stars in glow, with bright smile seem all plain For she outshines them all, I must confide. I long to be with her ~ a love so pure The thought of her brings cheer to fill my heart So strong but tender, a guide and friend for sure To be like her, is my wish from the start. If I were a kite, I would be flown to her No sea, or mount would rise up to the height Floating I will be on ~ celestial sphere Bedecked with joy and clad in great delight. Its how I feel I should send her my love Icon of strength she is ~ gift from above. Dears, this is from the workshop - my second attempt to write sonnet (with Munda's help) - would appreciate your feedback....thank you.... ![]() |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A beautiful sonnet for your mother, Amigo. I think it will make her proud! ![]() copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
very sentimental and a wonderful gift, this poem! |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I just know your mom is going to love this forever! (big huggsssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is a fabulous sonnet and a timeless classic! I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet amigo, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
amigo, May be...but you done her proud too! Nice write and sweet thoughts. ![]() |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Amigo,this is wondefful I enjoyed it very much.Mama`s are really great aren`t they? ![]() Juanita |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
What a wonderful tribute to a wonderful person. peaches |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
Lyra - Thank you, and yes, i hope it makes her feel proud.... ![]() Ecrivan - Thank you for stopping by and for your words Noah - Thank you, dear friend, for your kind & loving words.... ![]() Larry - Oh...thank you dear one, i hope she feels it too... ![]() Juanita - Yes, moms are really special, thank you, my friend. Peaches - Thank you for your wonderful words here... ![]() |
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