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Untitled poem for Valentine's Day
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Untitled poem for Valentine's Day |
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rebekah33 Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 140MD/NJ |
*****I'm giving this poem to somone special on V-day so I need honest opionons***** There was a girl who was heartbroken (much more then she ever let on) She felt (sometimes) her heart was useless. To be empty, forever. Then something magically wonderful happened. At first it was just a simple crush, that has happened a thousand times before to thousands of girls. But soon honey sweet dreams entered her head. And she felt her heart fluttering, coming alive. Because when she looked at him, she just had to smile. And she knew that with him she was ready to take that risk again. And there she stands with her arms and heart open... |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
And she said, "Be my valentine". Very pretty! Thanks for sharing. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh my gosh, I couldn't help but cry reading this in joy to feel the smile shine upon her face as someone finally loved her for who she was. (smiles) I bet she got up and asked him to be her valentine and he accepted, this is soooooooo romantic! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, I can relate to this so well for the girl of my dreams has never had a Valentine before, but now I'm so happy for her because I am going to shower her on Valentines Day with joy! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is soooooo gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rebekah, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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